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Terra Firma

Earth playing in space. Rolling over and over. Sunrise, sunset, spin!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 7:46:00 AM
Just reviewing my fav poems today And I got to wondering, WHERE is MARTY??? I hope you ok. I think it's been since May since we saw you here.!LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:33:00 AM
marty pls can you send me soup,ineed to tall you smthin aobut poetry and cant reach you,i ll answer you if you send
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Date: 1/26/2010 10:49:00 AM
I picture this and I am in awe that I'm on this rolling, spinning ball, in my Father's "hands"!! Awesome, Marty! Goes to my favs.!
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:33:00 PM
amazing isn't it. john
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:44:00 PM
Oh, I love this! This is a wonderful haiku The image you painted made me smile:)
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:42:00 PM
new poem posted
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:02:00 AM
Just wanted to stop by and say good morning and hope you have a great day.
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:30:00 PM
Just wanted to stop by and say hello.Hope all is well with you.
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:10:00 PM
I'm spinning... sunrise, sunset.. lets do it again... thanks for your comments on my poetry..
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:11:00 PM
I like it,Im dizzy!
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:48:00 PM
thank you for everything.
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:28:00 AM
This is delightful.. You are a master of the form. Thank you for your kind comments .
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:18:00 AM
Reading your poetry this morning, Marty, has been a wonderful way to start the day. This haiku is right on the mark. (It reminds me of a red landscape out in New Mexico/Arizona area.) Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:30:00 AM
Great picture Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/22/2010 6:20:00 PM
Cool Haiku.. Marty.. like the title as well... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:32:00 PM
good observation of the solar system!! Funny one...
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:50:00 AM
I agree with Andrea. Nice use of personification and alliteration for a creative perspecitive. You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:10:00 AM
This is really cool, Marty. And the irony of the title! Firma! I think this goes to favs! Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:22:00 PM
Very nice Haiku, Martin and well written. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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