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Terra Firma

Earth playing in space.
Rolling over and over.
Sunrise, sunset, spin!

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Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2010 at 7:46 AM

Just reviewing my fav poems today And I got to wondering, WHERE is MARTY??? I hope you ok. I think it's been since May since we saw you here.!LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

February 1, 2010 at 10:33 AM

marty pls can you send me soup,ineed to tall you smthin aobut poetry and cant reach you,i ll answer you if you send

Audrey Haick

January 26, 2010 at 10:49 AM

I picture this and I am in awe that I'm on this rolling, spinning ball, in my Father's "hands"!! Awesome, Marty! Goes to my favs.!

John Loving Iii

January 25, 2010 at 6:33 PM

amazing isn't it. john

Virginia Mitchell

January 25, 2010 at 5:44 PM

Oh, I love this! This is a wonderful haiku The image you painted made me smile:)

Colleen Bono

January 25, 2010 at 1:42 PM

new poem posted

Colleen Bono

January 25, 2010 at 9:02 AM

Just wanted to stop by and say good morning and hope you have a great day.

Colleen Bono

January 24, 2010 at 2:30 PM

Just wanted to stop by and say hello.Hope all is well with you.

Constance La France

January 24, 2010 at 1:10 PM

I'm spinning... sunrise, sunset.. lets do it again... thanks for your comments on my poetry..

David Byrne

January 23, 2010 at 8:11 PM

I like it,Im dizzy!

Colleen Bono

January 23, 2010 at 3:48 PM

thank you for everything.

Joyce Johnson

January 23, 2010 at 10:28 AM

This is delightful.. You are a master of the form. Thank you for your kind comments .

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 23, 2010 at 2:18 AM

Reading your poetry this morning, Marty, has been a wonderful way to start the day. This haiku is right on the mark. (It reminds me of a red landscape out in New Mexico/Arizona area.) Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

January 23, 2010 at 12:30 AM

Great picture Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 22, 2010 at 6:20 PM

Cool Haiku.. Marty.. like the title as well... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Doris Culverhouse

January 22, 2010 at 1:32 PM

good observation of the solar system!! Funny one...

January 22, 2010 at 11:50 AM

I agree with Andrea. Nice use of personification and alliteration for a creative perspecitive. You have me smiling with this one. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen