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Twilight has it's own wings and its own melody Battles with the mystery of a sun setting horizon dawning hues Pearl white smile's from the moon, in a mood of beautiful seduction Oracle within one thousand chants dances with the shadows of night shades For you, I will catch every star that I see in the evening sky surrenders Sparkling silver dust their trails leave magic spells whispers deeply winds Drinking from the milky way a mix of delicious chocolate Icing of a thousand shape shifting patterns emerge glowing Soft caramel and gorgeous nougat smiles golden melting Under a canopy of stars you remain cradled forever beautiful I would love to dance like planets that circulate around the sun Blood's rivers are like red cherries and float like wine Its colorful aura exudes amazing happiness Sweet like a dream, I lean my cheek on lace pillows Everything feels so right, our love will grow strong A collaborated poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 11.01.2018 Copyright © All Rights Reserved * Poem of the Week ; 14.01.2018

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Date: 1/21/2018 1:56:00 PM
Sunshine Smile to me this is a Free Verse poem and also a romantic poem. This is how I see your poem. Both ways. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/21/2018 2:06:00 PM
- It's a romantic free verse, dear Darlene :) - Glad you enjoy it, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/21/2018 5:03:00 AM
Trying to congratulate you on potw but soup seems to be playing up!
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Date: 1/21/2018 2:08:00 PM
- ... but you did it ... "soup" should not be played with ... :) - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2018 8:52:00 PM
Congrats on potw... birds will be happy :)
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Date: 1/21/2018 6:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2018 6:12:00 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on POTW. John
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Date: 1/21/2018 6:42:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/19/2018 9:58:00 PM
Sunshine, a big CONGRATULATIONS on POTW !
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:38:00 PM
- Thank you very much, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2018 6:21:00 AM
A great collaboration Anne-Lise and Liam, like always you deliver a beautiful poem, so no surprise to see it awarded POTW, so well deserved on this beauty...Maria xxx
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Date: 1/17/2018 12:25:00 PM
- Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2018 4:31:00 PM
This is such a beauty because the feelings that it brings to the heart bring a sense of love and peace. Thank you both for this collab. Celestially sweet.
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:55:00 AM
- A pleasure ... a sense of love and peace is something we need today, dear Eileen :) - Thanks for your friendly visit and congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2018 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations Anne-Lise & Liam on POTW! Well done a well deserved on this beautiful poem!
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:52:00 AM
- Always nice to have someone to share the credit with - Thank you Donna, for your beautiful greetings and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2018 6:43:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! Best Congratulations on this wondrous selection of yours being chosen as "POTW"!! A marvelously written free verse in every respect!! All The Best . . . Gary
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:50:00 AM
- Thank you for your greetings and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2018 6:04:00 AM
also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated wishing you all a blessed year ahead
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:48:00 AM
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Date: 1/16/2018 6:03:00 AM
congratulations anne lise warmly it brought a smile
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:47:00 AM
- Congratulations to you too, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2018 6:07:00 PM
Sweet little diddy of love. Congrats on your POTW. It's a ten.
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, congratulations and comment, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/15/2018 10:51:00 AM
Very well done on your POTW, Anne-Lise...what a marvellous kaleidoscope of colour you have penned here - a joy to read! My very best regards. :) john
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Date: 1/15/2018 1:04:00 PM
- Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2018 10:25:00 PM
I'm coming back for another read on this enchanting piece. And wanted to congratulate you on POTW! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/15/2018 1:03:00 PM
- Always welcome to my poem, Akkina :) - Thanks for lovely words and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2018 3:17:00 PM
A beautiful collaboration Anne and Liam...
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Date: 1/15/2018 1:02:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and your lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2018 12:39:00 PM
Oracle within one thousand chants,nice one i appreciate this work of ART
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Date: 1/14/2018 1:37:00 PM
- Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, Tumaini :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2018 12:38:00 PM
another greeat team-up which enchants...sweet congrats on POTW citation, anne and liam.... happy huggs
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Date: 1/14/2018 1:35:00 PM
Greatly appreciates it, dear Nette ... thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2018 12:04:00 PM
You two make magic together! I loved this romantic celebration of the beauty of love in the arms of nature. Wonderfully expressed by your pens! Congratulations on having this beauty honored deservedly with POTW! : )
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Date: 1/14/2018 1:34:00 PM
- A great honor and pleasure, many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Connie :) - Greatly appreciates it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2018 11:21:00 AM
You both can really write, Sunshine!!! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/14/2018 12:03:00 PM
- Thanks for lovely words and congratulations, Sunlite - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/14/2018 7:00:00 AM
oh wow what an awesome collaboration and many congrats on POTW!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:02:00 AM
- Really? ... thanks for a nice surprise, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2018 9:21:00 AM
You both did amazing on this piece.
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:08:00 AM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and your lovely comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/13/2018 8:15:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, A great collaboration here. This one has the immediate aura of enchantment through and through. Beautifully rendered with marvelous imagery. Outstanding Work, and A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:07:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment on Liams and my poem - appreciate your "fav.", dear friend Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2018 7:55:00 PM
You both paint a lovely picture, a wonderful collaboration. Loved reading.
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:06:00 AM
- Alesia, many thanks for the lovely comment on Liams and my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2018 6:20:00 PM
A wonderful poem and beautiful words. You two wrote a great piece together.
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment on Liams and my poem James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/12/2018 3:34:00 PM
Oh this is a great collab. So romantic and simply beautiful! I love it! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/13/2018 3:21:00 PM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and your lovely comment, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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