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Lake Cradles the Moon

lake cradles the moon the mournful cry of a loon tender nights of June
for Carol's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 8:04:00 AM
What an imagery here!Congrats Barbara on your well deserved win!--kASHINATH
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Date: 3/10/2011 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:03:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you have painted with this sensational Haiku, Barbara. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:21:00 AM
Such a pleasure to see you Barbara at the top with this worthy second place beauty. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:21:00 AM
This was truly magnificent, Barbara. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Barbara. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:07:00 AM
Sotender so lovely. many congrats
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:04:00 PM
i can feel it Barbara. Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:51:00 PM
This is pretty Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:41:00 PM
happy for you foe the moghty win, barbara.. congrats! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:24:00 PM
Congrats BG on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this expressive thrilling entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten success with luv..
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Date: 3/9/2011 1:59:00 PM
I remember the first time thinking this one lone haiku was super sensational. I'm glad to see it high in the contest!
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Date: 3/9/2011 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, Barbara
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Date: 3/3/2011 8:22:00 PM
Serene image, dear. But for the mournful loon, most of us enjoy "tender nights of June." VERY nice! Best wishes in Carol's fun contest. The rhyming haiku really appeals to me. You did a great job with the alliteration one as well, but I just couldn't get a read on that one. Wishing you success in both contests! Love from your fellow LNC. (A real plumber will be here tomorrow afternoon; the unlicensed one will be paying hefty fines.)
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Date: 3/3/2011 2:25:00 PM
Great write here Barbara!
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:43:00 AM
Short and sweet. Good Luck
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Date: 3/2/2011 7:24:00 AM
This is a fantastic write dear poet, and off to mine favz it goes, if you mind not ! Have a fantastic "June" Barbara ! much love, james
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:15:00 AM
Very cute,Barbara.Great entry for the contest.Good luck
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:57:00 PM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this simple one haiku here. Top notch!
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Date: 3/1/2011 8:59:00 PM
A rhyming haiku is a difficult endeavor, This haiku on June is.. Oh so clever! Very nice entry! Best of luck, Barbara! Blessings! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/1/2011 9:35:00 AM
What a wonderful visual you have painted of the moon's reflection, Barbara
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Date: 3/1/2011 7:23:00 AM
wonderful Haiku!Love it---kashinath
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Date: 3/1/2011 6:17:00 AM
Just beautiful! love,Deb
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Date: 3/1/2011 6:16:00 AM
June is the grandest month of all....
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