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Lake Cradles the Moon




lake cradles the moon

the mournful cry of a loon

tender nights of June



for Carol's contest

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Kash Poet

March 11, 2011 at 8:04 AM

What an imagery here!Congrats Barbara on your well deserved win!--kASHINATH

Sara Kendrick

March 10, 2011 at 3:54 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George

March 10, 2011 at 12:03 PM

What a beautiful picture you have painted with this sensational Haiku, Barbara. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

March 10, 2011 at 10:21 AM

Such a pleasure to see you Barbara at the top with this worthy second place beauty. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

March 10, 2011 at 9:21 AM

This was truly magnificent, Barbara. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 10, 2011 at 6:13 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Barbara. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

March 10, 2011 at 12:07 AM

Sotender so lovely. many congrats

Robert A. Dufresne

March 9, 2011 at 5:04 PM

i can feel it Barbara. Congrats on a great win!

Joyce Johnson

March 9, 2011 at 3:51 PM

This is pretty Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud

March 9, 2011 at 2:41 PM

happy for you foe the moghty win, barbara.. congrats! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 9, 2011 at 2:24 PM

Congrats BG on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this expressive thrilling entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten success with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2011 at 1:59 PM

I remember the first time thinking this one lone haiku was super sensational. I'm glad to see it high in the contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 9, 2011 at 1:51 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, Barbara

Carolyn Devonshire

March 3, 2011 at 8:22 PM

Serene image, dear. But for the mournful loon, most of us enjoy "tender nights of June." VERY nice! Best wishes in Carol's fun contest. The rhyming haiku really appeals to me. You did a great job with the alliteration one as well, but I just couldn't get a read on that one. Wishing you success in both contests! Love from your fellow LNC. (A real plumber will be here tomorrow afternoon; the unlicensed one will be paying hefty fines.)