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Lake Cradles the Moon




lake cradles the moon

the mournful cry of a loon

tender nights of June



for Carol's contest

naturehaiku

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 8:04:00 AM

What an imagery here!Congrats Barbara on your well deserved win!--kASHINATH

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 3:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George

Date: 3/10/2011 12:03:00 PM

What a beautiful picture you have painted with this sensational Haiku, Barbara. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 3/10/2011 10:21:00 AM

Such a pleasure to see you Barbara at the top with this worthy second place beauty. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 9:21:00 AM

This was truly magnificent, Barbara. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Barbara. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/10/2011 12:07:00 AM

Sotender so lovely. many congrats

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/9/2011 5:04:00 PM

i can feel it Barbara. Congrats on a great win!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 3:51:00 PM

This is pretty Barbara. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2011 2:41:00 PM

happy for you foe the moghty win, barbara.. congrats! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:24:00 PM

Congrats BG on your wonderful win in Carol's contest with this expressive thrilling entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten success with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 1:59:00 PM

I remember the first time thinking this one lone haiku was super sensational. I'm glad to see it high in the contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, Barbara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 8:22:00 PM

Serene image, dear. But for the mournful loon, most of us enjoy "tender nights of June." VERY nice! Best wishes in Carol's fun contest. The rhyming haiku really appeals to me. You did a great job with the alliteration one as well, but I just couldn't get a read on that one. Wishing you success in both contests! Love from your fellow LNC. (A real plumber will be here tomorrow afternoon; the unlicensed one will be paying hefty fines.)