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3 Minute Write

Fracas and frisson, it's chaotic at times Connections are made as we read between lines Something beneath makes a soul stand out A calming of heartbeat, a less loud self doubt Then we'll sail off on our own merry path The very next moment after sharing a laugh I'm thankful for friends lifelong or fleeting In all reincarnations I hope we carry on meeting

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I Am Anaya

Date: 12/15/2024 8:35:00 AM

It's not all easy breezy, is it. RBTL's connections or unwanted feelings as well. Love the positive thoughts. I've often thought of how recognition is going to work for me when in the spirit world chaos. Unfortunately, I'll be the one lost in some whirlwind looking for direction as usual in MY reincarnation, I really think that we may be a spark of our ancient selves, hah. Congratulations on your win! Great piece, dependable good reads you are D, oh and fum! :) I think I would've cheated-3mins yeah right.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/15/2024 10:52:00 AM

Thank you for the enthusiasm - appreciated. I'm quite a quick draw poet - so 3 minutes is quick but not unreasonable :)

Karen Jones

Date: 12/15/2024 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/15/2024 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Karen x

Jeanette Swan

Date: 12/15/2024 4:25:00 AM

All the best reading is between lines. Thought provoking write. J :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/15/2024 11:12:00 AM

Many thanks Jeanette

Matt Caliri

Date: 12/14/2024 9:03:00 PM

Congrats Dill, on placing 3rd out of 45! You are alsways a solid contender! Sorry it took so long to judge. Long story short my laptop would not and still does not accept the poetrysoup login screen. I'm doing this all on my phone just to get it judged. Regardless love the rhythm.and musicality to your lines. It's hip and It's fum!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/15/2024 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Matt, I do everything on my phone - probably looked at the site a handful of times on a laptop screen :) thank you for the feedback, much appreciated. I'm glad you liked my poem and it was fun to just let whatever flow into a few lines and see what appeared. Thank you :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2024 12:55:00 PM

What a fun write you have here. Never know what one can write in just 3 minutes. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/fun day writing away........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/5/2024 1:24:00 PM

Thank you Paula

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/5/2024 5:18:00 AM

Dear DD, Well said and with a flair for drawing out smiles. Human connections are met with greatness and fraility but gives us so much variation and interest. Loved reading your well inked 3 minute write. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/5/2024 9:42:00 AM

It's a funny old world :) thanks for your comment

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/4/2024 3:59:00 PM

This is real cute Dilly, so much said in your 3 minute write, in fact more than a lifetime’s worth, I think you hit the nail on the head, the inevitability of meeting over and over inside an infinity is an absolute given, see you in the next cycle lol! Cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/5/2024 4:03:00 AM

Language and speech was indeed the game changer for humans, was it discovered or created by us from some innate code we gradually developed, possibly! although some do go through life just beeping at each other, especially on roundabouts, Martians would definitely be perplexed lol!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/5/2024 2:49:00 AM

Yes, I wouldn't miss one of your parties in the comment thread :) funny to think if there's any reality to recognition of people over lifetimes then for some it would just be how we put words together - I feel there's some kind of coding analogy that I'm not clever enough to draw out. We are all just beeping like martians picking up on the right frequencies :)