24 Hours To Live

24 hours to live…I need to hurry and come up with a plan
	It’s only right to “worry” because I haven’t been half the man
23 hours to live…An hour gone by, I wanna break down and cry;
	Because I know with twenty-three hours to go, and I will die!
22 hours to live…I sat down to make amends with my Mother
	While I was there, although he didn’t care, I asked forgiveness from my brother.
	I forgave my Mother and she forgave me;
18 hours to live…I called my uncle and aunts to tell them I hate what we have gone through.
16 hours to live…I visited my sister and we reminisced about growing up together
	The fights, the fun; the tears and laughter will be cherished forever!
18 hours to live…I visited my Momma’s grave, and told her I’d be seeing her soon.
	I then placed a white rose I chose, on her headstone and cried that afternoon
13 hours to live…I called up each one of my baby girls and asked them to come see me
	I told them they were my world and asked them to accept my apology
	I spent five hours with my daughters ‘because I had so much to say
	I told them about life and the birds and the bees; about the importance of an 
            Education, sacrifice and family.
	I kissed and held Jasmine, Brianna and Lillian, then told them they had to go;
	I reminded them to always pray, ‘cause there will come a day, when I’ll see
	Them again, beyond the rainbow!
8 hours to live…My Peanut Butter came over and we made passionate love like never Before.  

                I told her she was my best friend and her love I’ll always adore.
	We held one another, kissed, touched, laughed as the hours ticked by.
	I got out of bed, kissed her forehead and for once I was the one to cry!
	She then left the house knowing I needed to be alone
	I couldn’t help but notice the time and my racing heart beneath my breastbone!
3 hours to live…Alone in my room, I fell to my knees
	I prayed to my God to heal me my spiritual disease
	I asked for forgiveness for all the sins I’ve ever done
	I even asked God if he would make it his business to accept me as his son
	I prayed, I talked to Him well into the final hour
0 hours to live…No more pain.  I felt my life force drain
	And then awoke in Heaven surrounded by white flowers!!!

Note:  Entry for Waylayee Whitlock's "If I had One Last Day To Live" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st Place win in Walayee Whitlock's contest "If I Only Had 1 Day To Live". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Jimmy. Love, Carol
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February 23, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Hehe had to come again and read it another time.... You did hit my heart... I do hope your life is beautiful and that you have no regrets...
Helbaoui Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 11:07 AM
This is touching and wont be forgotten... You deserve this win very much... Amazing it is.. Love it, Sami.
Pettit Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:14 PM
Jimmy, congratulations on attaining first place in Waylayee's contest with this fine entry.
Freeman Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Awesome Jimmy to see you at the top. Congratulations on your poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
Gibbs Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 10:00 PM
amazing write and congratulations on your stupendous win. Love Caroline
Guzzi Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 2:06 PM
You have really thought about this! Congrad's on your BIG win and I wish you had never had such hard thoughts come into your head a wish you a better life full of love. Light & Love
Haick Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:42 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win in the contest! Once again, you hit this way out of the ball park! This excellent Kyrielle has and will forever be a most memorable write, JAM. Much love, PB
Johnson Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Congratulations Jimmy. You certainly spent those hours gainfully. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:08 PM
Awesome Jimmy and sure deserved this top notch. Many congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:51 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of walayee, Jimmy
Richards Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Wow...this was so powerful and intense! A wonderful piece you did, Jimmy! Congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Super congrats Jimmy on your first place win in Lay's contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Congratz on you 2nd place entry. cool write
Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 10:03 AM
Many congratulations Poetic Warlock on your win in Audrey's fine contest with this terrific piece, most deserved >> James
Mitchell Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 2:24 AM
Beautiful poem! Congrats on your 2nd place win: )
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 8:09 PM
Congrats on your win, The Poetic warlock
Sweetheart Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:06 PM
Congrats Poetic Warlock on your winning poem in Audrey's contest with this exceptional write..enjoy another win this Sunday..with luv..
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August 15, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Congratulations on your big win in Audrey's contest, Jimmy! Awesome poem. Love, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Hey Jam, Thanks for submitting your wonderful entry for my first sponsored contest. And congratulations on your 2nd Place win! Awesome write, Popi! Love, PB
K. Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:51 AM
This is such a marvelous approach to Audrey's contest, Jimmy! It's very touching-- I definitely liked how you made it into a countdown--makes it more meaningful and gave it a greater impact! Very well done-- and that last line was totally beautiful-- I think your last day was very well worth it--bravo for this write!! --nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 1:39 PM
A brilliant write for the time Audrey has her contest in July.. a sure winner my friend.. seen from a very deep perspective... enjoyed Jimmy.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. in LUV...
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