1843

London’s clock just struck three
A forewarning of events to follow
The gloomy afternoon, an old mans delight
The weather of no concern, working late into the night

The village was in a festive mood
Of good will towards all men
Mistletoe and family gatherings
A twinkle in the eyes of young lovers

As midnight approached, on this special night
There appeared a spirit of a thousand souls
He woke the old man, who shivered in fright
Who are you he demanded, feigning his bravery

I am the spirit of all that was, and all that will be
Was the cold reply
So dress yourself old man, for I am taking you
To where you have been and were you will be

I will show you how you loved
I will show you how ambition consumed your love
Now you sleep counting pennies not from heaven
This path shall render you a dried heartless corpse

Come with me and my chains
As I show you the destiny of the unloved
Where spirits toil in the bowels of the earth
Hells fires fill them with painful regrets

The want and ignorance of the poor
If your life has amounted to earthy possessions only
You shall wander the afterlife in wanting and suffering
As these wisdom's you ignored here on earth

The old man remembered the soft touch of a kiss
That fate stole his bliss
The spirit spun his words so wise
The old man came to understand

The spirit of a thousand years
Drifted away with the morning light
So the old man, wrote his final wishes
Of good will to all of mankind

Then in silence, rope in place
He pulled away his chair
All of life’s efforts seemed fruitless now
As he escaped his life’s despair


Notes: Dickens meets Poe
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Montalbo Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 9:55 PM
Sad and lonely the old man but just to have glimps of what was sets his soul free its better love then not to..... Smiles.... Gina
Trifiatis Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 1:00 PM
The spirit of your poetry masterfully reminds us how transient life is and how little earthly wealth counts when the wealth of heavens remains untouched! Great work! Merry Christmas Arthur!
Vaso Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 10:01 PM
thank you very much and Merry Christmas!!
Hamilton Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 4:05 AM
such a talented pen Arthur yet again you stir your reader Shadow x smile hug
Vaso Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 10:02 PM
Thank you so much, hope you have a very merry christmas!
Manassian Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 1:23 AM
Arthur, this is a sad melancholic write, but it is a good meeting of Poe and Dickens.......Yes, you are gifted indeed. Lots of hugs to you, my dear. Have a wonderful Christmas. Thanks for reminding us of what truly matters.
Vaso Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 10:02 PM
You are so kind and all the best to you and your family this holiday season!
Roberts Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 11:21 PM
another great poem,,,,,Well done ....Seren
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December 25, 2013 at 10:03 PM
Thank you, hope you have a very Merry Christmas!
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