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07.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- No 1228 - Poetry Contest -
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

1st place in the contest

/ *// ( ### ) (Thirty degrees ) (in the shade * not *#*)) (complaining, offers you a flavor ) ) (from my freezer ##chocolate, vanilla,) (( strawberry or raspberry () pick your favorite ) () with a mouth full of ice cream # () //cooling and delicious // OOOOOOO \\ in the stomach ## your smile O // has become much wider )) O \ ############# / O \ yummy / OO \ ########## / O \ ######## / \ time / \ ###### / ######## ####### OOOOO ### *

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Date: 7/15/2023 3:05:00 PM
Wow, amazing!! Thia is so perfectly cool!! I can certainly see why this is a trophy placed poem! Your works would be so adorable in a children's book of concrete poems Anne-Lise!! I would buy the book for my grandbabies with such absolute adorable works in it such as this!! I love this and am putting it in my freezer...I mean my favorites!! <3 <3 <3
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Date: 7/15/2023 4:17:00 AM
brilliantly conceived and constructed well done
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Date: 7/14/2023 4:30:00 PM
Wow! How did I miss this stunning Shape Poem? This really deserves a trophy! Huge Congratulations! Anne-Lise, I really want to learn how to create a shape poem! Can you give me some suggestions? Love ~ Mala
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Date: 7/14/2023 1:40:00 AM
Lovely. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/13/2023 3:17:00 PM
An elegant and masterful presentation, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your trophy win. A fave for me! :)
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Date: 7/12/2023 8:38:00 PM
Yummy and cool ! Congratulations Anne on your well deserved trophy win. Indeed so very creative ! Hugs :)
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Date: 7/12/2023 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win Anne-Lise! To share ice cream with your friends is a grand time, like I'm having right now with your digital art display. It blew me away! xhugsx
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Date: 7/11/2023 1:51:00 PM
Wow Anne-Lise congratulations on your wonderful shape and amazing verse - truly a top winner. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 7/11/2023 10:19:00 AM
Back with sincere congratulations on your brilliant work of art's first place win.
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Date: 7/11/2023 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Anne Lise, I will be away for the next 2 weeks, on vacation: thanks
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Date: 7/11/2023 9:04:00 AM
Big CONGRATS to win TOP Love
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Date: 7/11/2023 8:55:00 AM
A mouth-watering treat for this summer. Congratulations on your trophy win Anne Lise.
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Date: 7/11/2023 12:49:00 AM
Wonderful shape Anne-Lise. So clever.
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Date: 7/10/2023 5:11:00 AM
How creative a work is this one_massively creative. Thanks for sharing this shape poem with us. Reads like a good contender if for a contest. I appreciate your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 7/9/2023 12:27:00 PM
A fun/creative/shape/picture write. Love It. Not sure but maybe you have tooooo much time on your hands. Hahaha. Now I want some of your ice cream. Hugs... Have a fun day eating away.........
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Date: 7/9/2023 2:22:00 AM
Love it! 118 in my front yard yesterday. Watermelon all day! Blessings my friend. Genius!
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Date: 7/8/2023 7:23:00 PM
Anne-Lise, a wonderfully creative poem.
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Date: 7/7/2023 10:28:00 PM
Ice-cream! I'd die for it. Thank you, dear Anne Lise. You made my day, shape and poem.
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Date: 7/7/2023 9:59:00 PM
Scrumptious! Ice cream + summer melt together. What a creative posting - art + poetry. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 7/7/2023 4:45:00 PM
the older I get the more ice cream I eat, what have I got to lose at 72
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Date: 7/7/2023 12:37:00 PM
Anne-Lise, your creation is a remarkable display of creativity. The subject matter, complemented by meticulously chosen words, exhibits an exceptional level of discernment. GL
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2023 12:41:00 PM
- Thank you Las, that was a lovely comment :) - hugs
Date: 7/7/2023 11:29:00 AM
Nice reminder on a warm summer day, For some reason, I eat ice cream in night only, summer or winter, it does not matter. Nice digital art.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2023 12:44:00 PM
- I also eat ice cream in the evening/night ... in the sun it melts and drips ... it gets sticky ... thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs
Date: 7/7/2023 8:13:00 AM
amazingly creative Anne-Lise all i want now is ice cream!!! hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2023 12:45:00 PM
- I have several in my freezer ... saving one for you, Jan :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs

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