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It still feels as empty as the day you left...in fact, more so now. The longer I'm without you, the more I miss you.

90s Elton beside 70s Elton

Daniel my brother this is your song If there is a God in heaven, not fake or fantasy He knows you have a good heart I cry at night, you will understand my pain If there is a God in heaven, not fake or fantasy Please dear brother say everything is fine I cry at night, you will understand my pain Sorry seems to be the hardest word in the world Please dear brother say everything is fine To forgive, I never got to say goodbye Sorry seems to be the hardest word in the world All is gone, this is a goodbye yellow brick road To forgive, I never got to say goodbye If I could fly in harmony with thin paper wings All is gone, this is a goodbye yellow brick road Now I am alone and lost in the empty sky If I could fly in harmony with thin paper wings He knows you have a good heart Now I am alone and lost in the empty sky Daniel my brother this is your song Song titles by Elton John, listed below : Daniel Your Song If There's A God In Heaven A Good Heart I Cry at Night Sorry Seems To Be The Hardest Word Please Goodbye Harmony This is a Goodbye Yellow Brick Road Empty Sky 09.04.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/14/2018 9:52:00 AM

Superb pantoum, dear Anne-Lise! You aced it putting those song titles together in a beautiful, smooth flowing manner! I am sure this masterpiece will do very well in SO's contest! Love it! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2018 11:57:00 AM

- Not for S.O. contest, Pandita :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 4/13/2018 7:30:00 AM

I love Elton John and you have used some of my favorite songs of his in this wonderful Pantoum. Amazingly done Anne- Lise....Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2018 11:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/11/2018 12:33:00 PM

Great timing Anne-Lise, we had a two hour tribute to Sir Elton last night on TV, well done my dear...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2018 1:20:00 PM

- I wish I saw it, Charlie - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/11/2018 1:24:00 AM

Lovely Pantoun and a fine choice of songs, Anee-Lise, well done. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2018 4:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/10/2018 3:26:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , Beautifully penned :) Hugs~~Niall

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/11/2018 4:13:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 4/10/2018 6:33:00 AM

Very beautiful heart felt ode for your brother and pantoum. x God exists, there is a heaven.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2018 11:47:00 AM

- Leanne, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2018 5:56:00 PM

I love every one of these hits Anne-Lise. You created a real gem with those titles. Brava! : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2018 11:47:00 AM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Yazmin Malik

Date: 4/9/2018 2:33:00 PM

Beautiful <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:46:00 PM

- Many thanks, Yazmin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/9/2018 10:56:00 AM

Excellent use of the song titles, Sunshine, good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:44:00 PM

- Not for contest, Eve :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2018 10:22:00 AM

impressive pantoum, dear anne... you'll make elton proud,,, happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:28:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/9/2018 9:27:00 AM

Masterfully expressed, you should enter the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:27:00 PM

- "My Summer Flower, Josephine" is already posted to the contest, Richard :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/9/2018 9:25:00 AM

A nice pantoum, sunshine ... It was a pleasure to go through ... Good luck with the contest ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:37:00 PM

- Many thanks Probir, for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 4/9/2018 7:45:00 AM

Captain Fantastic couldn't have said it any better. Nice tribute to Elton...Yellow Brick road was the first album I ever bought...So cool. LOve it...All the best Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:43:00 PM

- Many sensitive texts from E.John ... I always feel something special with his songs :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Captain Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/9/2018 6:38:00 AM

Another great pantoum Sunshine, you do these really well. I grew up listening to Elton John. Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/10/2018 1:54:00 PM

:)))

Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/10/2018 1:15:00 PM

You've put me under pressure now lol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:36:00 PM

- There are so many great artists ... a fun way to write a tribute, Tom :) - I look forward to reading your Pantoum poem :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/9/2018 6:30:00 AM

Yes, there is a God in heaven and yes, everything is fine furthermore harmony you both bind dearest , Anne-Lise ! A very spiritual Pantoum that uplifts the soul! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:32:00 PM

- She hopes he has come to heaven ... that's her comfort, my friend Demetrios :) - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/9/2018 6:23:00 AM

Awesome, Anne-Lise! The song titles blend seamlessly.. a poem of sweet brotherly love!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 2:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2018 4:50:00 AM

Bravo Anne-Lise, you wove the song titles in so beautifully and I love many of the ones you have chosen plus so many more:-) Was lucky enough to see Elton in concert twice, he is quite the showman and a fabulous singer:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2018 4:56:00 AM

- You make me jealous, Jan ... I've always wanted to "meet" Elton John ... - Many thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)