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"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering? " Quote by _Constance La France Sun dust swirls on white wings in the empty house The charisma abounds Past meets in the soul of eternity even after falling Days and years of relentless running the voice of the soul is not buried in the drawer In the dawn of the sun listening to the silence within you in an intermediate phase of something indeterminate White sophisticated lace gossip tired after countless days of running Not in my power to alter fate Silence was our greeting 28.05.2023 Anne-Lise Andresen Copyright © All Rights Reserved - C - Quotes - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/7/2023 9:41:00 PM

‘Silence was our greeting’ ~ enjoyed this superbly crafted poem, warmest congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise

Ann Peck

Date: 6/7/2023 5:28:00 PM

Anne-Lise, this is really lovely. I love "white sophisticated lace gossip"and "silence was our greeting" Congratulations

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/6/2023 8:34:00 AM

Back with Congrats on your top list contest win, my friend. Blessings

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2023 3:58:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 6/5/2023 9:52:00 AM

Nice poem. A voice of an empty house and a silence greetings - nice rendering of an abandoned house. Congrats for win,

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/4/2023 1:00:00 AM

"the voice of the soul is not buried in the drawer", "Not in my power to alter fate" - Beautiful lines. Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 6/3/2023 7:01:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/30/2023 7:36:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, You used the quote and penned a good poem. I echo what Jo said. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/30/2023 5:30:00 AM

Touching poetry, good work:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2023 7:09:00 AM

- Many thanks Jo, for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/29/2023 6:08:00 AM

Silence was our greeting! Great ending!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2023 7:08:00 AM

- Kim, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/29/2023 2:32:00 AM

So emotional a poem, dear Anne Lise. Hope you will gain a high place.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2023 7:08:00 AM

- Many thanks Victor, for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/28/2023 11:45:00 AM

A lovely rendering of inner turmoil, within a house that remembers. A great picture, too. :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2023 7:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/28/2023 6:25:00 AM

I perceive the vocal resonance of the unoccupied dwelling that conveys significant meaning. Anne-Lise's astute observation highlights the act of introspection during an ambiguous transitional period.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2023 9:48:00 AM

- Listen for the whispering voice of the soul ... exciting, Las :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2023 5:45:00 AM

I hear the voice of that empty house that speaks volumes. Excellent description Anne-Lise-- listening to the silence within you in an intermediate phase of something indeterminate...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2023 9:46:00 AM

- I think it's exciting with old houses that have a soul, Vijay :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs