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18.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Unwritten Absence
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

1st place in the contest

Sound of a rusted gate weeping deaf tears hopelessness in a coconut shell Chilly by autumn's absence of sunshine the wings are tired from headwinds Don't want to face another winter a reminder that the blizzard stealing another year and treats us harshly Past storms have come and gone The voice is dulled with sorrow and gloom Cracks in the clouds are unwritten Time to replace that which was lost Mother's firstborn child a little angel No prayer or curse, heart is still beating

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/29/2023 2:47:00 AM

I felt the sorrow and all the emotions flowing throughout your lines so well phrased and articulated. A poignant and moving write that left me in awe: i especially loved the lines “ cracks in the clouds are unwritten “ “ and those last three lines.:: hits home! So evocative ! One of those poems i read it once and knew is a top winner: thank you for writing, Congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:10:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Ink :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/20/2023 7:56:00 AM

They live in us, and with us -- the mystery of eternal love yet to unfold. God bless you. Great write!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:10:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Joe :) - hugs

Debjani Mitra

Date: 9/20/2023 7:33:00 AM

unique metaphors, somewhere they touch the Soul, Deaf tears, cracks in clouds....a poignant write

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:10:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Debjani :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 9/20/2023 4:37:00 AM

Very touching ! Much is lost, but yet not everything! There is still time to replace what has been lost. A gripping poem dear Anne. Love and hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:10:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Valsa :) - hugs

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/19/2023 8:13:00 PM

Great poem, Anne-Lise… I love the change of the seasons, but i totally get about the winter. I am not looking forward to shovel snow and driving like a turtle or the chills that sip through my bones. Lol. Good luck in the contest. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:09:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Akkina :) - hugs

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/19/2023 5:57:00 PM

A beautiful poem Anne-Lise. A sure fired winner. Good luck with the contest my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:09:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Jerry :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/19/2023 3:18:00 PM

leaving it to the beating heart of a child to make all things right again, after a very long barren winter. gl in the contest, Anne, its a beauty of a poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:09:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/19/2023 3:10:00 PM

still that final hope, a very moving poem, heartbreaking words, yann

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2023 7:08:00 AM

- Much appreciate your visit and comments, many thanks, Yann :) - hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 9/19/2023 11:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Nice and short.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2023 12:38:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/19/2023 3:28:00 AM

Wonderful writing. I love this, sweetheart. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2023 9:40:00 AM

- Dear Gina, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2023 2:30:00 AM

I can well understand the anxiety you feel as your Northern winter approaches. I doubt I would survive in such coldness. Great poem though. Loved your scenes in poetic form.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2023 9:39:00 AM

- Winter feels longer every year that passes, Victor - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/19/2023 1:38:00 AM

Lovely and poignant:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2023 9:37:00 AM

- Thank you, Jo :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/18/2023 5:58:00 PM

The lines you've written are filled with deep emotions and vivid descriptions. I found great pleasure in reading your entry for the contest. Your poem is incredibly powerful and thought-provoking.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2023 9:37:00 AM

- Always positive feedback from you, Las ... many thanks :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2023 4:49:00 PM

So emotive and expressive are these lines. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/19/2023 9:35:00 AM

- Sara, thank you for your visit and comment on my poem :) - hugs