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She knows when the lights are turned off there will be light somewhere else Understanding of connections between life and death The rains will come and the seeds will germinate by the green youth trees The attraction is there, but also the fear her world is falling apart as a house of cards through the soul's dark night A transcendent and celestial experience the arrival of the journey via divine powers The frequency, sound and volume adjusted frequently She testing the woven fibers with burning longing against a background of nothing but bluish air The soul longed for so much, a renewal Listen to the sound of trickling streams before they merge into the endless sea A reconciling and humble journey has ended 04.03.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - ''J'' - Words - Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 2nd place in the contest

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:05:00 PM

Sunshine, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/11/2023 7:05:00 PM

Anne-Lise, back to congratulate you on your win!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/9/2023 7:44:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your contest win with this wonderful poem, Anne-Lise. Blessings.

Valsa George

Date: 3/9/2023 6:07:00 PM

The journey has ended. But the road stretches to infinity... a transcendent and celestial experience.... aspring for a renewal. Profound writing. Congratulations on your win, dear Smile. Hugs...

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/9/2023 1:26:00 PM

Gorgeous Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/7/2023 7:12:00 AM

A lovely write/picture. Good Luck. Hugs. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/7/2023 12:31:00 AM

And a brilliant journey it is too Anne. We learn so much along the way. Tom

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/6/2023 2:38:00 PM

Great sentient decription as this travels across Our prereptions Anne-lise, well woven in And out.'

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/5/2023 6:11:00 PM

wow one of your best works dear friend, a fav for me, its rich in tapestry and vision xo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 2:04:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment and especially for your "fave", Vie Rose :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/5/2023 5:01:00 PM

"She testing the woven fibers with burning longing" -- beautiful poetry! While in the human body, spirit yet senses its divine, loving source, for there lingers a soul hunger, an alienation that no experience on earth can fully satisfy.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 2:03:00 AM

- "The attraction is there, but also the fear" - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Joe :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/5/2023 12:34:00 PM

A work of art, Sunshine. Best wishes Pangie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 2:01:00 AM

- Thanks a lot, Pangie ... glad you liked it :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2023 8:32:00 AM

Ahh!! I like this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I wonder how long will it take to get to that destination. Of course, the Bible tells us to be absent from the body is to be present with the Lord so maybe instanteously. Thanks for sharing and for your pleasant visit to my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 2:00:00 AM

- The journey takes the time you need, Sara - Many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/5/2023 7:50:00 AM

Anne-Lise, superb writing, a great poem about the cycle of life!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 1:58:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Tania :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/5/2023 7:39:00 AM

Beautiful poem dear poet, I am attracted to the depth and wisdom of this poem...I will fav this poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 1:57:00 AM

- Frederic, many thanks for your comment and especially for your "fave" :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/5/2023 6:09:00 AM

Outstanding in every way, Anne-Lise. Your poetry captivated my interest from the very first line to the very last. I am quite impressed with the range of words. GL

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 1:56:00 AM

- Las, thanks a lot... glad you liked it :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/4/2023 12:08:00 PM

A journey to undertake with its joyous life. Best for a win. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 1:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your words, Victor ... always a pleasure :) - hugs

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/4/2023 10:00:00 AM

Hello Anne - I read your entry twice to soak in the meaning and the poetry as well. It is written in wonderful poetic fashion with power and feeling. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. May this day find you well. Best of luck with the contest. Have a wonderful weekend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 1:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Lisa :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/4/2023 8:50:00 AM

Simply wonderful. Your poem held my attention from start to finish. I am thrilled with the vocabulary. A FAVE, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2023 1:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment and especially for your "fave", Vijay - hugs