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30.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Spring Haiku 
Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

3rd place in the contest

when trumpets blow spring petals awaken to life - crystal stream chuckle

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Date: 4/9/2025 3:05:00 AM
" crystal stream chuckle" - I can hear the sound, indeed. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2025 8:32:00 PM
Now that is the way of awakening! lovely dear friend, Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/6/2025 2:32:00 PM
huge congrats on your fine win, anne...splendid 'ku !
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Date: 4/6/2025 12:22:00 PM
Back with congratulations to you Anne Lise, Hope you have a lovely week ahead. Tom
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Date: 4/6/2025 10:48:00 AM
Back with my congrats. I adored the chuckling line.
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Date: 4/6/2025 8:01:00 AM
Peaceful and serene image Anne-Lise. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/6/2025 7:13:00 AM
Anne-Lise, a sweet and creative haiku with a fun last line. Congratulations on your winning placement. - hugs
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Date: 4/3/2025 6:38:00 AM
Love the stream chuckle. As children we gathered chuckies ( small white pebbles) from the burn (stream) Thanks for the memory. Anne-Lise. Hugs
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Date: 4/1/2025 10:18:00 AM
Anne-Lise, an amazing image and haiku. Your words really bring pleasure into my life. Smiles and thanks. This is the best mood elevator there is!
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Date: 4/1/2025 3:44:00 AM
So beautiful.... both the image and the haiku. All the best Anne. Love and hugs.
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Date: 3/31/2025 10:06:00 PM
Really really cute!
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Date: 3/31/2025 5:57:00 PM
Yours is the first I've read that had the proper 3rd line kicker. Well done. Man, oh, man, do I want to walk into that picture. How content I'd be just to breathe surrounded by that nature ... wonder if there's room to build a cabin. CayCay
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Date: 3/31/2025 10:55:00 AM
Two spring beauties, picture and your poem. Lovely.
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Date: 3/31/2025 8:15:00 AM
Wonderful image, and interpretation. Let the trumpets blow! I am ready.
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Date: 3/31/2025 3:07:00 AM
How very beautiful Sunshine….both poem and picture! Debx
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Date: 3/31/2025 2:29:00 AM
You seem to have created a small river. Beautiful. Hugs.
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Date: 3/31/2025 1:41:00 AM
so creative and musical, enjoyed your spring " symphony" thanks poet
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Date: 3/31/2025 12:03:00 AM
A joyous spirit of springtime very nicely expressed.
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Date: 3/30/2025 10:54:00 PM
What a happy poem! I love a chuckling crystal stream! If I had a trumpet, I'd blow it, just to see the petals awaken and here it.
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Date: 3/30/2025 4:44:00 PM
Beautiful lovely crystal smiles!
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Date: 3/30/2025 1:19:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery and the photo is perfect! Enjoyed!
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Date: 3/30/2025 1:14:00 PM
I'm chuckling alongside the river of y our beautiful poem Anne. Eager to see spring in all its glory. I believe its coming soon :)
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Date: 3/30/2025 1:03:00 PM
Good one Ann-Lise. Like the picture as well. Good luck in the contest
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2025 1:09:00 PM
- Thank you for reading and best wishes :) - hugs
Date: 3/30/2025 12:18:00 PM
Been lovely here today Anne Lise, it's finally here I hope it's in Norway too. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2025 12:21:00 PM
- Cold wind today, but sunshine and spring are on the way Tom :) - hugs
Date: 3/30/2025 10:51:00 AM
Lovely picture and poem, Anne-Lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/30/2025 12:22:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs

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