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- Haiku X 350 - spring awakening -

                                   when trumpets blow spring
                                       petals awaken to life -
                                      crystal stream chuckle

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2025

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Christuraj Alex Date: 4/9/2025 3:05:00 AM " crystal stream chuckle" - I can hear the sound, indeed. Congratulations! Login to Reply

thriveni c mysore Date: 4/7/2025 8:32:00 PM Now that is the way of awakening! lovely dear friend, Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/6/2025 2:32:00 PM huge congrats on your fine win, anne...splendid 'ku ! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/6/2025 12:22:00 PM Back with congratulations to you Anne Lise, Hope you have a lovely week ahead. Tom Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/6/2025 10:48:00 AM Back with my congrats. I adored the chuckling line. Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 4/6/2025 8:01:00 AM Peaceful and serene image Anne-Lise. Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/6/2025 7:13:00 AM Anne-Lise, a sweet and creative haiku with a fun last line. Congratulations on your winning placement. - hugs Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 4/3/2025 6:38:00 AM Love the stream chuckle. As children we gathered chuckies ( small white pebbles) from the burn (stream) Thanks for the memory. Anne-Lise. Hugs Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 4/1/2025 10:18:00 AM Anne-Lise, an amazing image and haiku. Your words really bring pleasure into my life. Smiles and thanks. This is the best mood elevator there is! Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 4/1/2025 3:44:00 AM So beautiful.... both the image and the haiku. All the best Anne. Love and hugs. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/31/2025 10:06:00 PM Really really cute! Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/31/2025 5:57:00 PM Yours is the first I've read that had the proper 3rd line kicker. Well done. Man, oh, man, do I want to walk into that picture. How content I'd be just to breathe surrounded by that nature ... wonder if there's room to build a cabin. CayCay Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 3/31/2025 10:55:00 AM Two spring beauties, picture and your poem. Lovely. Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 3/31/2025 8:15:00 AM Wonderful image, and interpretation. Let the trumpets blow! I am ready. Login to Reply

Deb M Date: 3/31/2025 3:07:00 AM How very beautiful Sunshine….both poem and picture! Debx Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/31/2025 2:29:00 AM You seem to have created a small river. Beautiful. Hugs. Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 3/31/2025 1:41:00 AM so creative and musical, enjoyed your spring " symphony" thanks poet Login to Reply

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 3/31/2025 12:03:00 AM A joyous spirit of springtime very nicely expressed. Login to Reply

David Crandall Date: 3/30/2025 10:54:00 PM What a happy poem! I love a chuckling crystal stream! If I had a trumpet, I'd blow it, just to see the petals awaken and here it. Login to Reply

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 3/30/2025 4:44:00 PM Beautiful lovely crystal smiles! Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 3/30/2025 1:19:00 PM Gorgeous imagery and the photo is perfect! Enjoyed! Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/30/2025 1:14:00 PM I'm chuckling alongside the river of y our beautiful poem Anne. Eager to see spring in all its glory. I believe its coming soon :) Login to Reply

Oliver Mckeithan Date: 3/30/2025 1:03:00 PM Good one Ann-Lise. Like the picture as well. Good luck in the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2025 1:09:00 PM - Thank you for reading and best wishes :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/30/2025 12:18:00 PM Been lovely here today Anne Lise, it's finally here I hope it's in Norway too. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2025 12:21:00 PM - Cold wind today, but sunshine and spring are on the way Tom :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer Date: 3/30/2025 10:51:00 AM Lovely picture and poem, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/30/2025 12:22:00 PM - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs