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Annie as an Angel

The sunshine of your laughter and raindrops of small tears Your steps so soft and light Your blond curls and smiling eyes We didn’t want to let you go A mother and father's love for a child The time has come the moment to say goodbye Living without you we are slowly dying inside Like a leaf blown away by the wind Keep your smile on your face until we meet again little angel 16.01.2016 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 1/22/2016 10:25:00 AM
Makes me so sad when I read a poem like this and feel the heart break of the parents hearts. love phyl
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Date: 1/22/2016 11:43:00 AM
- To lose a child is often called "the lonely grief "- The grief can last a lifetime, so very sad !!! -Thank you for the lovely comments, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/21/2016 2:33:00 PM
So lovely and sad and moving!
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:42:00 PM
- Thomas, none of us are prepared for that our children going to meet the death - Thank you for the lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:12:00 PM
- ............. but, sad Sarita - Thank you for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/20/2016 7:42:00 AM
So touching, moving in it's simplicity. Hugs/ Chrissie
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:05:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, Chrissie:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2016 2:08:00 PM
That was an amazing Write Don't stop written
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Date: 1/18/2016 2:27:00 PM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, sher-vawn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/18/2016 8:54:00 AM
loss is never easy to accept....because of all the memories kept....in our hearts surrounded with care....the body may be gone, but the Love is forever there....very touching words anne....;)
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:12:00 AM
- So true, my friend Eric - Thank you for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 6:12:00 PM
Hope this masterpiece is written just as a poetic expression and doesn't refer to an actual event for if it is real then is the worst form of tragedy, dear Anne-Lise! A seven!
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Date: 1/18/2016 2:23:00 AM
- Nobody knows the grief and pain, without having lost a child - Thank you for the lovely comments, dear frien Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 5:57:00 PM
so sweet and tinged by the sadness of losing her. I love that picture you put with it.
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Date: 1/18/2016 2:22:00 AM
- A very cute little angel :) - Thank you for the lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 2:33:00 PM
Anne -Lise, through the tears that fall after reading this heartfelt write i do write my comment. The gentility of this write and the content are both deeply felt as one does read. This is something i shall never have to go through yet i know many couples do and as i read my heart does go out to them. One cannot help but be touched by these words Anne-Lise. A seven for each tear that does fall. Hugs....Vladislav. X
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Date: 1/17/2016 2:49:00 PM
- Any person who can cry for another human being, shows a big and beautiful heart <3 - Thank you for the lovely comments, Vladislav :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 12:25:00 PM
A personal loss, especially when one goes before we, leaves an indelible scar, good memories tied to loss. I pray I don't have to experience it. My heart goes out to anyone, and the poem moved me, personal am sure Anne Lise. Thomas
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:00:00 PM
- To lose a child is every parent's big nightmare, I do not think someone who has not experienced this may know this feeling, Thomas -Thank you for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 12:17:00 PM
touched this sweet farewell, anne.. a beauty of an angel now guiding you..hope this is fiction.. happy day and huggs
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:11:00 PM
- ....... There are both large and small angels ..... boys and girls -Thank you for the lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 11:56:00 AM
deeply moving piece anne lise losing such a gift an angel is born in heaven i believe as the love lives within forever excellent piece dear friend wishing you a blessed day pal
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Date: 1/17/2016 12:50:00 PM
- To lose a child is often called "the lonely grief "- The grief can last a lifetime, so sad -Thank you for the lovely comments, my friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 10:17:00 AM
So touching, Anne. There is perhaps no greater sorrow for a parent than the loss of a child. Powerful write. 7. hugs!
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:02:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/17/2016 6:28:00 AM
Even if I'm not yet a mother, i will really be in tremendous grief if a child-the joy of life dies my very dear friend Anne Lise. I'm deeply moved by your very beautiful and wonderful poem my friend. Thank you so much for sharing! Hugs and Have a blessed and joyful weekend! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 1/17/2016 7:12:00 AM
- Even though you do not have children yet dear Leonora, you have a heart of "motherly love" ...... clean and true :) - Thank you for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 10:07:00 PM
A terrible thing to lose a child. I can't even imagine the pain. A very sad write, Anne-Lise. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:47:00 AM
- Nobody knows the grief and pain, without having lost a child - Thank you for the lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 8:52:00 PM
you've captured the emotions of your title here very well, anne lise. so sad! great poem, though...
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:44:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 4:55:00 PM
I too lost a child. It's been 27 years. I think of him everyday. Love the poem.
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:42:00 AM
- He will always be a part of you - and always have a place in your heart, Daniel - Sorry for your loss, bless his soul - Thank you for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 4:51:00 PM
The lose of a child stays with you so deeply and your poem captures this grief beautifully
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Date: 1/17/2016 5:40:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments, Gail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 3:16:00 PM
My friend in Birmingham used to work in a children's hospice but in the end she had to give up as she could no longer cope with the heartache - so so heartbreaking Anne lise:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2016 3:42:00 PM
- As nurses in care we meet patients in the terminal stage, but it is absolutely terrible and heartbreaking when it comes to children - Strong experiences can pose tremendous personal burdens... even for a nurse - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 2:17:00 PM
there is nothing sadder, you have captured this sadness well
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Date: 1/16/2016 2:35:00 PM
- Grief is a process that takes a long time - Thank you for the lovely comments, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 2:04:00 PM
this brought a huge lump in my throat Anne Lise I can think of nothing worse than losing a child:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2016 2:27:00 PM
- Losing a child are perhaps the greatest disaster which can befall a   mom and dad - hugs and thank you Jan // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/16/2016 1:49:00 PM
Heartfelt write. Well done Anne. Thanks for visiting my page!
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Date: 1/16/2016 2:19:00 PM
- Thanks, Ken - hugs // Anne-Lise :)