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17.04.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Twelve Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

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1st place in the contest

- Glimmering Stones In Moonlight -

    - Nature's treasures - 
      are worth more than money and gold in your pocket - 
                                                                quote by poet

    A light breeze, soft as a little cat's paw
    In the moonlight on the beach, quiet and calm
    a bluish light with hints of silver on the horizon
    The stars above, I’m lost in the beauty
    Waves touch the feet, erase the footprints

    A secluded gem, a sight to explore
    Of the thousands, wonderful treasures
    A secret paradise, so unique and peaceful
    Safely hidden between grain of sand
    Quartz stones that glitter in the moonlight

    Love to turn them over and over in my hands
    Provides a soothing and softening effect upon touch

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Date: 4/22/2025 8:20:00 PM
Hard stones " Provides a soothing and softening effect upon touch" a new way to look at it :)
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Date: 4/21/2025 7:05:00 AM
Nature is fascinatingly beautiful and intriguing. Congratulations dear Anne-Lise! hugs :)
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Date: 4/20/2025 11:39:00 PM
Your quote is so true Anne-Lise, congratulations to you on your win. Tom
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Date: 4/20/2025 11:19:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your win in the contest, dear Anne-Lise. hugs
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Date: 4/20/2025 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your write, picture and quote are perfect. I love all 3. Hugs... Happy/Blessed Easter Day.....
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Date: 4/20/2025 9:56:00 AM
Nice work, Anne-Lise! Beautiful as always. Blessings ~
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Date: 4/19/2025 12:19:00 PM
Anne-Lise, you have a direct and wonderful way to make it easy for me to follow your line of thinking. It's a pleasure to read really! BTW, you can take quartz rocks in the dark and scratch them together to make an internal spark. Have you tried that? Something to do with the crystal structure and electrons moving inside. You probably knew that already. Take care.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2025 10:36:00 AM
- I've never seen rocks like that in real life, Duke :) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 4/19/2025 1:41:00 AM
Beautiful image and lovely poem. Everything is clothed in ethereal beauty! All the Best dear Anne. Wish you a happy Easter. Hugs
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Date: 4/18/2025 2:16:00 PM
Anne-lise, nature's treasures are indeed priceless. Great title, poem, and picture all wrapped nicely. Best wishes.
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Date: 4/18/2025 9:43:00 AM
Anne-lise, this poem is truly rich in beauty and creativity, nothing can be more serene than surrounding oneself in nature. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/18/2025 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful. XXX
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Date: 4/18/2025 9:06:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Anne-Lise, it focuses on a quiet beach, the moonlight, the stars, and the sensations evoked by the gentle waves and the sand. It hints at themes of solitude, discovery, and the peace found in nature, as well as the tactile experience of holding quartz stones. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 4/18/2025 5:46:00 AM
Magnificent! Another Fav!
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Date: 4/18/2025 1:54:00 AM
What great picture and poem, so full of imagery. I am sure it will rate high. Best for a win.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2025 3:04:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment... glad you liked it, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 4/17/2025 9:33:00 PM
Beautiful and natural.Wish you the best in the contest.HP
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2025 3:03:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment and good wishes, Akham :) - hugs
Date: 4/17/2025 2:46:00 PM
your poem is so beautiful, grace inhabited your verses and experience, merci poètesse
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2025 3:02:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Yann ... I really appreciate your comment :) - hugs
Date: 4/17/2025 2:34:00 PM
Your poetic lines are always in need of being read slowly or more than once. Your poetry are all gems, Anne-Lise. Love the picture!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2025 3:01:00 AM
- Read it as many times as you want... low activity on the soup at the moment ... many thanks, Lin :) - hugs
Date: 4/17/2025 2:15:00 PM
Wonderful! A favorite for sure :-) hugs AA
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2025 2:58:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comment and your "fave", Abdullah :) - hugs
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