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The ground is chained in frozen iron Snow crystals glued on pine cones Overhangs embroideries of polished ice The wind shakes and shatters them into millions of pieces Slowly more brightness toward longer days A new light is born across a white landscape With its beauty and bliss a squirrel in a pine tree Thoughts and reflections how beautiful it is 04.02.2016 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 8/6/2016 2:25:00 AM
I noticed how much you write about the seasons. Over here (South Africa) we last saw snow in 1981 and summer is way too hot . Send us some snow we will send you some sun. Lovely imagery .
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Date: 8/6/2016 8:22:00 AM
- A good suggestion, Jannie ..... I send you with pleasure a little snow, when it comes :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/7/2016 10:38:00 AM
A chilling Winter scene painted in my mind. Favorite line: "With its beauty and bliss a squirrel in a pine tree."
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Date: 5/7/2016 12:28:00 PM
- February is winter in Norway :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/7/2016 10:10:00 PM
Such a lovely poem so full of February imagery, Anne Lise. Congratulations on POTD!! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/8/2016 3:04:00 AM
-Thank you for congrats and enjoyable visit, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/7/2016 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day! Just beautiful and breathtaking! Blessing! :)
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:54:00 AM
- Thank you for congrats and enjoyable visit, Chantelle Anne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 5:06:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 2/7/2016 4:53:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice comments and friendly visit, Roger :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 4:21:00 PM
beautifully written, great imagery . Cheers, Craig
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:35:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Craig :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 3:09:00 PM
Squirrels are always in action! Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:34:00 PM
- A pleasure to share with you all :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 3:05:00 PM
Dear Anne Lise: Let me add my congratulations for Poem of the Day. I love the imagery of winter. The little squirrel in the tree is a delight. SuZ
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:31:00 PM
- Squirrels are adorable :)) - Thank you for congrats and enjoyable visit, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 1:59:00 PM
I told you so! Congratulations, dearest Anne- Lise! Hugs!
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:14:00 PM
- Not easy to "judge" my own poems ..... easier to find a "masterpiece" of others :) - Thank you for congrats and enjoyable visit, dear friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Nicely worded. :)
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Date: 2/6/2016 1:51:00 PM
- Thank you for congrats and enjoyable visit, Louis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 12:01:00 PM
Such a pretty write Anne Lise congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:14:00 PM
- Thank you for congrats and enjoyable visit, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 8:42:00 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:12:00 PM
- Thanks for many beautiful words and a 7, Funom - I'm happy that you find my simple poems for pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 8:20:00 AM
First off, I would like to start by saying congrats!!!! Secondly, as much as I hate the cold and the snow this Poem brings out thee beauty in it all!!!
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:08:00 PM
- I'm not fond of winter .... but, beautiful to look at - thank you for nice visit and congrats Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/6/2016 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Anne! hugs
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:48:00 AM
- Thanks .... a pleasant surprise, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2016 1:50:00 PM
Flashing with excellent combined beauty my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:00:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my winter poem, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2016 11:15:00 AM
How lovely, Anne Lise! I like your imagery and the bright outlook on better days to come. Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:00:00 PM
- Two steps closer to spring, Paul :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my winter poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2016 9:25:00 AM
so pretty. Here we are celebrating that dang groundhog. Not sure if he predicts early spring or not this year. Hope your squirrel means early spring!!
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Date: 2/5/2016 10:51:00 AM
- Hoping for early spring, winter is so long - Squirrels we see both summer and winter - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my winter poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2016 8:48:00 AM
Lovely piece, Anne-Lise. We don't have a real winter where I live. (Check the last word in the second to last line-tree.)
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Date: 2/5/2016 10:47:00 AM
- Oh.....maybe there were three trees :)))......... thanks, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2016 5:51:00 AM
This is a masterfully beautiful creation, dear Anne-Lise! Excellent and a seven, dear friend!
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Date: 2/5/2016 10:48:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments on my winter poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/5/2016 3:51:00 AM
Spring is getting ever closer...lovely
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Date: 2/5/2016 5:43:00 AM
- Thanks, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2016 10:08:00 PM
Oh Anne Lise thank you so much for that uplifting poem, makes me feel cool just reading it, it is so damn hot here and we are heading for 41c. which is well over 100f. and I am not looking forward to it, take care......Vera
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:02:00 AM
- Too hot for me, dear Vera ...... hard to breathe I would think - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my winter poem, a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2016 7:38:00 PM
Enjoyed! good portrait of winter!
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:00:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my winter poem, a pleasure to see you Thomas :) - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2016 6:43:00 PM
Spectacular imagery! The first line's both beautiful and poignant... You always show me a different view on the things you see, anne. 7. Thanks. hugs :-)
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:59:00 AM
- My poems are often about what happens in my life, you're right Kim - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my winter poem, a pleasure to see you :) - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2016 12:58:00 PM
Anne-Lise, I love this write and the picture of the squirrel, sometimes I feel so sorry for them running across the snow searching for food, well done !!!
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:13:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments on my winter poem, a pleasure to see you B.W. :) - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/4/2016 12:52:00 PM
feel--good piece, anne.. have the northern lights appeared?... smile, spring is coming soon.. happy day with huugs!
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Date: 2/4/2016 12:56:00 PM
- No Northern Lights here where I live, Nette - Thanks for visiting and nice comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)