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12.06.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Echo, Enduring, Empty

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France
1st place in the contest

- Echo ~ the witness who talked too much - quote by poet a mournful echo sounds swamped my pulsating heart - do not repeat them empty room - masonry wall historic bells from gray peaks

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Date: 6/15/2025 5:57:00 AM
Eeiry sensation when reading this one Abbe-Lise. I love it! Congratulations and hugs! :)
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Date: 6/15/2025 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations poet friend on your top wind with a thoughtful take on the prompt and and an intelligent write. wish you a cheerful day.
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Date: 6/14/2025 9:46:00 PM
This reads like an echo. Well done! <3
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Date: 6/14/2025 7:44:00 AM
Hmm...deep, beautiful. Often, silence speaks louder than words. The spirit lingers presence, in every step we have taken, what we have created, and where we have paused to ring and listen to our returns. No vibration is ever entirely gone~ continuing on and on to heal or destroy.
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Date: 6/14/2025 5:30:00 AM
A painful echo is haunting, especially in an empty room. Powerful haiku, dear Anne. Love and hugs.
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Date: 6/13/2025 11:56:00 PM
A haunting one here. So creative.
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Date: 6/13/2025 5:15:00 PM
this is inspiring and excellent, thanks poet, bells are a high symbol of religion and history have a nice week end in Norway ???
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Date: 6/13/2025 2:16:00 PM
Anne-Lise excellence! Very, very nice. Strangest thing happened, I brought up my knees and tilted my laptop downward towards my thighs and experienced a sensation of nearly falling out the window. It was like 1 second quick, but woooo, that's a first.
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Date: 6/13/2025 10:47:00 AM
Hi, Anne. I don't remember many poets on here, however I remember you. Always excellent. I imagine this is for a contest. Good luck, and thank you for sharing your deep thoughts. After my mom, left, I was left with so many questions and thoughts. A painful way to be trapped. Solitude is not something I like repeating. Love the title Always, Thank you... * Linda
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Date: 6/15/2025 2:34:00 AM
- I remember you too, Linda... you never showed interest in my poems... - Thank you :) -
Date: 6/13/2025 10:09:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, great lines beautifully executed. Good luck with the contest my friend. Wishing you a fabulous weekend.
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Date: 6/13/2025 3:37:00 AM
Powerful poem. Well done . Hugs :)
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Date: 6/12/2025 4:43:00 PM
Would be an awful sound to remember. I heard my nephew’s scream in my mind for awhile after hearing him scream in the hospital…was haunting. So glad he is doing well and grown up now.
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