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diary, pink, and dear-bilde

Dear faithful diary Dawn beautiful and pink Dazzling early sunrise Deference in silence Describing with the soul Deserves admiration Deep ... deeper part of me 29/08 2016 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) http://www.howmanysyllables.com Each line has only 6 syllables (poem in the Pleiades form)

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/26/2016 11:03:00 AM

A nice creation my lovely lovely friend. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2016 1:19:00 PM

- Thanks for the comments a 7 and friendly visit, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 7:55:00 PM

Anne-Lise, a unique description of a diary. Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2016 2:28:00 AM

- Thanks for my win Kim, nice to participate in your contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/1/2016 7:53:00 PM

Congratulations, Anne-Lise, wonderful poem. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2016 2:27:00 AM

- Thank you Eve, for friendly visits and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/1/2016 3:37:00 PM

I used to keep a diary and then stopped but when I think about it I really should start keeping one again. Nicely done of this form. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2016 2:26:00 AM

- Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2016 11:57:00 AM

Always a pleasure to be back with congratulations...well done, Anne-Lise:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 2:15:00 PM

- Thanks for re- reading and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/1/2016 10:06:00 AM

Congrats on your win Sunshine

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 10:53:00 AM

- Thank you Joseph, for friendly visits and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/1/2016 6:39:00 AM

Congrats on your placement, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 10:53:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/1/2016 5:13:00 AM

Beautiful Pleiades ... Congratulations ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 5:14:00 AM

- Thank you Probir for friendly visits and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/1/2016 2:15:00 AM

Excellent. Heartfelt and touching write. I do liked this nostalgic. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 3:59:00 AM

- Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 12:43:00 AM

I am happy to see this on the winners list Anne-Lise. Congratulations! ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 5:10:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/1/2016 12:37:00 AM

Very, very nice little piece, Anne-Lise, congrats! Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 5:10:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Viv - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo

Date: 8/31/2016 8:04:00 PM

Anne-Lise, just beautiful lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 5:09:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visits and congrats, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/31/2016 7:47:00 PM

A lovely way to describe a diary Annie-Lise...best of luck in contest...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2016 4:00:00 AM

- Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/31/2016 11:20:00 AM

Very lovely writing! Soothing and introspective.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2016 11:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the comments and friendly visit, Joe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Ainsley

Date: 8/30/2016 9:42:00 PM

Beautiful like the no fly zone of my heart. Thank you for a visit into your private side of being.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2016 7:49:00 AM

- Thank you Michael, glad you came to visit:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/30/2016 9:18:00 PM

I once wrote down my deepest thoughts in a diary, until poetry came into my life, then all of those emotions ended up there instead... I liked this nostalgic, heartfelt poem. Very beautiful, Anne-Lise... If this is for a contest, I wish you the best of luck!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2016 7:53:00 AM

- A good comparison, diary and poems .... much emotion in a poem, Kelly :) - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 8/30/2016 4:47:00 PM

We can depend on diaries to keep our deepest secrets Anne-Lise. Good luck.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2016 7:51:00 AM

- Yes Jean, faithful :) - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2016 3:18:00 PM

Interesting word choice and how you showed it. Very nice.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2016 7:49:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nilima Deb

Date: 8/30/2016 2:03:00 PM

deep write ! great dear !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2016 2:12:00 PM

- Glad you like it, Nilima :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/30/2016 9:47:00 AM

Brilliant write, great form.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2016 11:53:00 AM

- Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/29/2016 3:38:00 PM

Good poem, well done, I'v not done the style yet, cannot get my brain, round it x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2016 3:50:00 AM

- This form is not easy .... but a challenge to try - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/29/2016 11:57:00 AM

I like the depth of the poem and the deeper depth at the end. Lots of wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2016 3:54:00 AM

- Kai,thank you for the lovely visit - lots of wishes, and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2016 10:47:00 AM

This is very creative, Anne-Lise, and your choice od theme is quite unique. Superb end line...I'm looking forward to seeing your entry on the winners' list:) Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2016 3:53:00 AM

- Win and loss with a smile :) - Thank you for the lovely visit and comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2016 10:45:00 AM

i really like the way this was scribed, dear anne.... ohh sweet musings!,, happy days with huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2016 1:10:00 PM

- Happy day for you too, Nette :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/29/2016 9:10:00 AM

Exceptional write A-L...much enjoyed

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2016 1:08:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy it, Tim :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)