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- Dark Brainstorm -

Being strong is his only option
Satisfaction is not always the fulfillment of what you want
when you gets stuck in an unwanted situation
Witch hunting and lynsjing
He loses control and it makes him desperate
The bitterness has taken over, as a development of a toxic virus
Bile from the stomach leaves a bitter taste on the tongue

His defense mechanisms are in constant preparedness
It's about making choices and all choices have consequences
A fear of losing his identity, total paranoia
Thoughts like a spider web in destruction
The water is polluted, rape of our world
Twisted lines of madness ...
nightmares, tears and flashbacks
He does not know the rhythm of the music







                                    Brainstorm Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsored by: John Hamilton
                                  ~  4th place in the contest ~




16.10.2018
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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/16/2018 10:02:00 AM Gosh, a certain politician comes to mind when reading this. Excellent! Congratulations on your win and on having this featured! Happy Holidays my friend! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/16/2018 12:26:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France Date: 12/16/2018 9:07:00 AM Anne-Lise, congratulations on having your wonderful poem chosen as a Featured Poem this week, enjoy the honor ~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/16/2018 12:26:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter Date: 11/14/2018 9:51:00 AM Great writing for you! So different! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/14/2018 11:10:00 AM - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 11/13/2018 2:44:00 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on you win!! The notion of the "spider web" is very important indeed. A very creative and powerful verse for sure!! A FAVE TOO!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/14/2018 11:10:00 AM - Hi Gary, many thanks for your visit a fave and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 10/29/2018 1:47:00 AM Congratulations on your win and kind wishes, Kai Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/29/2018 1:51:00 AM - Thank you very much, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jordan Marks Date: 10/26/2018 8:03:00 AM This reads like a song! Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2018 11:23:00 AM - In that case a sad song - Many thanks for friendly comment and congratulations, Jordan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 10/26/2018 7:52:00 AM Congrats on your win Anne.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2018 11:24:00 AM - Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debjani Mitra Date: 10/26/2018 5:26:00 AM I liked the metaphor of " spider web " ..very well-thought out ..the entire content. Congrats dear Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2018 5:31:00 AM - Many thanks for friendly comment and congratulations, Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton Date: 10/25/2018 1:10:00 PM Great write Anne-Lise, congrats on a fine placement in my contest! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2018 1:23:00 PM - Many thanks for my 4th place in your contest, John ... nice to attend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 10/20/2018 1:54:00 PM I think that we all know this guy; so how come he gets to run things? Twisted! Well penned though. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/20/2018 2:40:00 PM - Everything is twisted, M.L. ... he can not cope with it ... he is trapped - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven Date: 10/20/2018 7:45:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, a deep, powerful, creative write from your golden pen. I wish you all the best in the contest. I loved the content of this excellent work Anne-Lise. You used the form so well in this write. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs....Mike. XX A Fave. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/20/2018 2:48:00 PM - It will not surprise anyone to know that this is one of the most common types of fear that people experience, Mike - Many thanks for your fave and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/19/2018 1:48:00 PM Wow...you must know psychology well to be able to write this poem, Sunshine. These lines give us a peek into a disturbed mind. One wonders what brought on these thoughts in his mind. Intriguing piece. Thanks for your visit to my blog, dear. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/20/2018 2:44:00 PM Nice to see you, Eileen :) - Psychology is an interesting but sometimes difficult to understand theme - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 10/18/2018 7:37:00 PM Very deep & emotional write Anne-Lise...superbly rendered my friend...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/20/2018 2:40:00 PM - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 10/18/2018 12:51:00 PM Powerful write Anne..Best wishes Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/18/2018 1:07:00 PM - Thanks for good wishes (I need it :) ... and your comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile Date: 10/18/2018 12:42:00 PM Perhaps your great write is fiction but for me it nails our current commander in chief!! So well done!!! xx00 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/18/2018 1:05:00 PM - To me this is fiction, Mike ... but surely someone's "life" - Many thanks for friendly comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/17/2018 5:17:00 PM Very deep thought provoking poem.Anne-Lise; I loved it! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/18/2018 1:44:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 10/17/2018 5:39:00 AM Woah, this is an intelligent deep, thought provoking write... he does not know the rhythm of the music.... great last line... life can be difficult sometimes... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM - S.O. many thanks for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 10/17/2018 4:09:00 AM Great stream of consciousness. There is one thing I might consider, maybe amend your poem slightly, if you do not mind me saying. You switch from 'one' to 'you' and to 'him'. Is this deliberate? Many kind wishes, Kai Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2018 11:18:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unfamiliar Flower Date: 10/17/2018 2:10:00 AM Loved it! He does know the rhythm of the music!! Being strong is his only option !! Good luck on the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, U.F. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/16/2018 4:28:00 PM I feel in your words the plight of a troubled mind--well depicted poem, Anne-Lise. Best for a win. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 10/16/2018 4:08:00 PM Terrific entry Anne-Lise, he doesn’t know the rhythm of the music. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2018 11:16:00 AM - Charlie, many thanks for visiting & comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/16/2018 3:30:00 PM ohh, how biting are your images, brooding and stark, anne... just shows you can go from gentle , loving to desperate... greeat job and happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2018 11:15:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 10/16/2018 2:40:00 PM Wow, this was dark and felt very lonely to me. A tortured mind is what I read and it has grabbed me. This was really good my friend. Best of luck in the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2018 11:15:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting & comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)