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I saw a man who made large sailing ships inside a bottle ... Large sails, the ship was fully manned and the flag was hoisted I put my thoughts, feelings and words into a bottle ... Slowly, carefully I filled the bottle ... The thoughts, feelings and words flowed out ... 24.11.2012 A-L Andresen :)

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Robert Nehls

Date: 7/15/2014 1:26:00 PM

Very fine, Anne Lise. Your thoughts feelings and words were transformed into a wonderful poem. And the ship now sails. Very well written, my friend.... Robert.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2014 1:31:00 PM

- Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem - "A Bottle Of" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis

Date: 4/3/2014 9:06:00 AM

Anne Lise Such a creative and sweet write. Thank you for the kind comment on my Umbrella poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/3/2014 12:57:00 PM

- Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Robin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/7/2013 2:59:00 AM

Very very nice Annie,,,, congratulations on the nice win,,,, you have a blessed day xoxoxo's ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2013 6:37:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/28/2012 2:06:00 PM

Congrats Anne, sorry im late reading this and me being a sailor and all, very nicely done,Blessings Carl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/28/2012 2:24:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations,Carl - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome

Date: 12/19/2012 1:22:00 PM

Wish you could send me a bottle. here's one full of love for you. best wishes great poem. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2012 1:27:00 PM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Peter. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/9/2012 11:06:00 AM

Congrats on your win, sorry or late. It's really wonderful heart bottle. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2012 11:07:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, bl -never too late - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Anne Lise. Love Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2012 6:03:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/3/2012 3:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your very imaginative win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 3:19:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sean Goodwin

Date: 12/3/2012 9:02:00 AM

Very nice work. A well deserved win for you. Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 10:06:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2012 6:30:00 PM

Anne.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 1:33:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2012 5:26:00 PM

this truly was one of your best and a well deserved win, COngrats, sweetie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2012 3:28:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/1/2012 9:48:00 AM

congrats on a great win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 10:54:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/1/2012 7:26:00 AM

Big congratulations on your winning place Anne Lise, love it xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 7:27:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations Mandy- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 7:26:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Craig. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/1/2012 4:15:00 AM

A bottle for your thoughts instead of a penny....nicely put! Congrats on your win. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 5:10:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 12/1/2012 3:16:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Anne, like it!! Jag

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 5:09:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/1/2012 12:28:00 AM

Congrats I enjoyed your piem....Seren

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:29:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/1/2012 12:29:00 AM

Oops typo or i should say ipado. Should read poem sorry.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/30/2012 7:14:00 PM

See I new you were always a winner! PLease do write for my new 6 line contest on LIGHT Congrad's on your skillfull win! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:29:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore

Date: 11/30/2012 6:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! I love this poem..Hugs, Holly

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:28:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gail Debole

Date: 11/28/2012 8:30:00 AM

Hi Anne - Yet another novel idea from the workings of your mind! Love it. - Gail

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2012 9:37:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Gail. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2012 3:35:00 PM

It appears a mere bottle is incapable of holding back all that you have to say. I like your Poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/28/2012 2:12:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Richard. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 11/27/2012 2:32:00 PM

I love this poem Anne. Your word flowed out fluidly in this penned piece. Sending smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2012 2:42:00 PM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Connie. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Nickle Read

Date: 11/27/2012 11:54:00 AM

I love the way you've written this poem, wow, it all works so well.......I think I'll just read it again. Love it! Read ;{>

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2012 2:42:00 PM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments David. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ajayi Angel-Simon

Date: 11/27/2012 9:59:00 AM

Great poem Anne Lise... So deep... It tells me there's a minefield in me. It tells me to the adventurous in my thinking and perception of my milieu. Love. Angel. Also thanks for reading my poems... so encouraged

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2012 10:41:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Angel. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/27/2012 8:03:00 AM

Light poetry but deep words within :) thank you anne for your lovely visit to my haiku, glad to have your presence there :D - Hug, Yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2012 10:41:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Yanny. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/27/2012 5:49:00 AM

This is very nice Anne. I would like to do the same thing. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2012 7:39:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Lucilla. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)