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22.08.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Beautiful Or Broken -
Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

Poem of the Day 

24.08.2023

- Beautiful -

                                         As seasons change 
                                     watch the dazzling colours
                             Oaks turn a deep warm reddish brown
                             Inspiration for deepening the thoughts
                               tempting and flirtatious heartbeats
                                        Chaotic scenes ensue
                                           Guilt falls heavily
                                    when foliage etch with pain

                                         Pandoras apparitions
                                    Fountains in gloss and glory
                               Journey drifts through golden fields
                                        Pirouettes of beauty
                                      tangled threads of time
                              - slips into a masterpiece, speechless
                                  soothing synchronicity harmony

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Kelli White Date: 9/19/2023 12:05:00 PM Calvin take me away breathtaking beautiful poem. Kelli Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 9/11/2023 9:46:00 AM Anne-Lise, I like how your poem resolves from chaos and conflict into synchronicity and harmony as the seasons change. I love the phrase 'pirouettes of beauty'. Well done, and congratulations on your potd ~ John Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/11/2023 12:04:00 AM Anne-Lise, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, and your POTD honor, I love the image too, Constance Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/28/2023 8:49:00 PM change watch the dazzling colours Oaks turn a deep warm reddish brown Inspiration for deepening the thoughts…Congratulations on POTD! Autumn is my favorite time of year! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/27/2023 9:16:00 AM Back with congratulations on another win. I enjoyed reading it again. Your "Beautiful" is a lovely Fall write/picture. Hugs... Have a blessed/great day.................... Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 8/27/2023 8:53:00 AM Missed seeing this as POTD. Now let me give you Congratulations on your twin victory.... first place winner in the contest and the poet with the honor of POTD. Love and hugs dear Anne. Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 8/26/2023 9:38:00 PM "Guilt falls heavily when foliage etch with pain" - A great writing. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 8/26/2023 11:13:00 AM Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win with this lovely poem. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/25/2023 8:35:00 AM Well deserved POTD, dear Anne Lise. Hugs. Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 8/24/2023 11:29:00 PM Congratulations gladly given to you. Anne/Lisr. Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 8/24/2023 10:07:00 PM Congrats and i loved the poem! :) Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 8/24/2023 8:41:00 PM How beautiful is the imagery created by your words Anne-Lise. Love this one by you. Big Congratulations on Poetry Soups Poem Of The Day... Login to Reply

Mark Toney Date: 8/24/2023 7:51:00 PM Anne-Lise, your poem is an “Inspiration for deepening the thoughts.” Congratulations on Poem of the Day! Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 8/24/2023 7:41:00 PM Heartfelt congratulations on your POTD, Anne-Lise. A gorgeous poem, and a fave for me. Blessings and hugs. :) Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 8/24/2023 6:52:00 PM As Summer sweetly says goodbye, and Autumn agrees to arrive, so gracefully; it's a beautiful moment indeed. The way seasons serenade, is sensational. You've created a Masterpiece, Anne-Lise. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/28/2023 6:23:00 AM - Many thanks Brandy, for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Eve Roper Date: 8/24/2023 6:10:00 PM Back with congratulations on POTD! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:56:00 AM - Many thanks for coming back with your congratulations, Eve :) - hugs

John Lawless Date: 8/24/2023 6:05:00 PM "Journey drifts through golden fields" WOW....one word to encapsulate a seasons passing....masterful.... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:56:00 AM - Thank you so much, John :) - hugs

Akkina Downing Date: 8/24/2023 3:09:00 PM Back with a BIG smile to congratulate you on POTD my beautiful poetess friend. Simply BEAUTIFUL! :) hugs~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:55:00 AM - Many thanks for coming back with your congratulations and BIG smile, Akkina :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/24/2023 2:37:00 PM Beautiful poetry Anne-Lise, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:54:00 AM - Many thanks Belle, for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/24/2023 2:09:00 PM Congratulations on your "Beautiful" POTD win. A lovely Fall write. The seasons will change soon. I love this write and the Fall time of the year. Hugs... Have a great day...................... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:53:00 AM - Paula, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes Date: 8/24/2023 2:07:00 PM Back with heartiest congratulations. So glad this was aptly rewarded with POTD. Hugs ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:52:00 AM - Many thanks for coming back with your congratulations, S.V. :) - hugs

Ink Empress Date: 8/24/2023 12:07:00 PM Absolutely stunning poem, well deserved POTD. Congratulations Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:52:00 AM - Many thanks Ink, for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Arlo Parker Date: 8/24/2023 11:44:00 AM POTD 2 b sur!! :-)) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2023 12:52:00 PM 2 b sur!! :-)) (?)

Heidi Sands Date: 8/24/2023 10:55:00 AM Congratulations for this brilliant POTD. Enjoy :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:50:00 AM - Heidi, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

I Am Anaya Date: 8/24/2023 10:36:00 AM Every year, there's that indescribable feeling I get when autumn shows its beautiful self "flirtatious heartbeat" "foliage etch with pain" just two examples you have harmonized and adequately described with colorful undertones in autumns unique change. Thank you for sharing your wisdom, poetess, Congratulations on your stunning POTD Anne-Lise! Xhugs ~Anaya Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/25/2023 1:50:00 AM - Autumn tells its time ... it is not my favorite season ... but colorful and beautiful ... thank you for your comment and congratulations, Anaya :) - hugs

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