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---Frozen Finery

frozen finery cascades shield tormented earth an owl screeches

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2011 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Debbie in Charles's contest "Haiku Your Way". Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 1/31/2011 12:50:00 PM

Many congrats Deborah on your fine win, a little gem it is....:)

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/30/2011 12:57:00 PM

Hi Deborah - Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the haiku contest. Best wishes, KC

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/30/2011 10:21:00 AM

happy to help, Debbie :D congrats again :)

Kash Poet

Date: 1/29/2011 5:32:00 PM

Congrats Debbie(changed ?) on your well deserved win in this contest!This is a beautiful Haiku----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2011 4:43:00 PM

WAy to go, haiku mistress!! Congratulations on a well deserved win. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2011 4:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 1/29/2011 1:26:00 PM

eerie and wonderful, congrats on your success. Déirdre

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/29/2011 12:14:00 PM

Thanks SO much Nikko!!! yup you're correcto mundo! Fixing it to "es" now~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/29/2011 12:02:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Haiku your way contest with this brilliant write... enjoy with luv ...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/29/2011 11:27:00 AM

this is another wonderful haiku from you Debbie-- enjoyed how you describe winter here & love that first line, very unique!-- btw eep hope this helps & correct me if I am wrong-- "screeches" would be better? just want to help :) Congrats on your win :) hugs :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2011 8:24:00 AM

Makes me think of one of your photographs.....you have a whole wealth of inspiration up there in "cold country!" Congrats dear Debbie!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2011 3:27:00 PM

Those that are in the frozen north can really relate to this one..Thanks for stopping by and commenting..My side comb is referring to an actual comb that I put in my hair when I am really having a bad hair day..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/28/2011 5:05:00 AM

ahhh what is the subject of the verse, could it be a frozen cascade? hmmmm what things freeze and cascade, hmmmm, one might have to think on that aye?

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/27/2011 7:09:00 PM

Intresting - What is the "frozen finery" supposed to be? Yours Matthew Anish

Constance La France

Date: 1/26/2011 5:05:00 PM

Lots of visual in this haiku , best of luck in contest, soup mail in a moment~~

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/26/2011 5:47:00 AM

enjoyed your work today, sorry I have been negligent lately but my son has been home and we have been "busy" over the holidays. take care!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2011 5:10:00 AM

Great visual and imagery ... good luck in the current contest Debbie.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 10:32:00 PM

This is sure an interesting juxtaposition, Deb. why not "an" owl? Is it for the contest. Good luck , my friend. I am out of here NOW. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 7:01:00 PM

Nice picture you have painted with apt images, deb

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/25/2011 6:02:00 PM

"an" owl screeches? Good one., BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2011 5:39:00 PM

Hello, D.G. just passing by the soup.. i see the coldness is still around... and the world can't get use to the ice thin blanket it wears in certain parts of the woods..... Glad i live in Texas... nice haiku... yes with out the ~s... God bless,..p.d.