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is the grey heron happier than me,
When he hovers over the small lake,
I have no trouble imagining it, dear neighbor,
And the raven more wicked than black, say

Is he happier than you, great poet?
I have no trouble imagining it, dear neighbor,
And the duck accompanied by sweet oranges,
His destiny ends in apotheosis, to put it better,

Is the cat striped with yellow happier?
When he walks like a Siberian tiger,
I have no trouble imagining it, dear neighbor,,
The animals look at the measure of everything,
They are much happier than you, Poet.

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Date: 8/21/2025 1:36:00 AM
Read your poem again. Worth it.
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Date: 8/19/2025 5:18:00 PM
I like this, "His destiny ends in apotheosis, to put it better," :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/20/2025 12:43:00 AM
thank you so much dear poet
Date: 8/18/2025 9:57:00 PM
That cat purrs, the raven caws with pride, the duck lines up with his family, id say thats happily ever after, dear poet. Sagacious! Enjoyed.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/20/2025 12:44:00 AM
thanks a lot anaya, my favorite pet is the duck, looks like smiling all time and no evil in the soul have a sweet day dear poet
Date: 8/18/2025 3:38:00 PM
Yes they are happier than us poets who write about it for they live it and thats much better !
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/18/2025 4:10:00 PM
thanks poet for the touching comment blessings
Date: 8/16/2025 1:25:00 PM
Your poems not only thought provoking but flavorful, and they almost have an ancient influence! Enjoyed,Yann!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2025 1:21:00 AM
thank you so much, KIm for the nice words, i love the idea of influencing as an almost ols poet wishes
Date: 8/16/2025 1:15:00 PM
Interesting to ponder. But do animals really even know what happiness is? Their lives look hard outside. Pets inside just lay around doing nothing. Ha!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2025 1:19:00 AM
thanks andrea for the nice comment, i observe birds very often, they are very clever, i think, knowing where to go when flying, demands a brain, for sure, happy are they ? they have no conscience may be, but they know the "bien être" i think so i am ? smiles enjoy your sunday
Date: 8/16/2025 1:08:00 PM
Hello Yann, Oh a wonderful meditation on joy, envy, and the mystery of animal grace. It tiptoes through the meadow of melancholy with such gentle wit and wonder. I’m smiling and sighing all at once. Blessings, Dear Yann, Daniel
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2025 1:24:00 AM
wonderrful way, smiling and sighing all at once, that' the point fo every human thought, i think and feel that so often, thanks poet for the wonderful words wishes
Date: 8/16/2025 10:18:00 AM
Less brains and therefore more accepting of basic nature...could be? Maybe far wiser, therefore less brain-fully consumed, as you tacitly speculate? A thoughtful, intriguing write.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/17/2025 1:22:00 AM
thnaks joe for the supportive comment, your questioning is excellent wishes
Date: 8/15/2025 7:54:00 PM
Happy inspite of the destiny.Well done.Like it
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 1:51:00 AM
thank you so much Akham for being supportive
Date: 8/14/2025 4:51:00 AM
Well, I don't know if they are happier or are they constantly in the struggle of survival except for the domesticated animals that live in the house with us which possibly could be happier than us. Thanks for sharing the thoughts though. I have never thought of animals being happy or unhappy except for the dogs that I have had as pets. Sara K
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 1:54:00 AM
thanks Sara, this is a thoughtful comment, thinking about i know animals can suffer too in the wild, elephants massacre, eaten zebras by lions, this is for sure nature is not innocent, good point
Date: 8/14/2025 2:23:00 AM
- As long as the animals are free... they are happy, Yann :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 1:55:00 AM
thanks anne lise, they can be more happy, i think, they need freedom too
Date: 8/14/2025 2:14:00 AM
I sense the thoughts you hold as true.... Yaan. The creatures of the field and sky find joy in simpler ways than ourselves, the burdened souls of man. They bear fewer burdens.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 1:58:00 AM
excellent thinking poet, i think, our souls can be burdened, brilliant comment that made me think about wishes
Date: 8/13/2025 9:21:00 PM
I feel what you think is right.... Yaan. The animals and birds are happier than human beings. They have lesser worries. All their botheration is to appease their hunger. Men have too many botherations. Well expressed, dear friend.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 2:00:00 AM
thanks Valsa, birds are very sensitive, crows"wake me up", when my soul is troubled, they feel our simple emotions, i guess wishes wishes
Date: 8/13/2025 7:55:00 PM
You ask pertinent questions on life and its happiness. We all wish for happiness but rarely find it. It eludes us. Perhaps we search in the wrong places. Loved your poem.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 2:01:00 AM
thanks victor, this is an helpful comment for me, enjoyed
Date: 8/13/2025 6:31:00 PM
Dear Yann,your poem is a delightful exploration of happiness through the eyes of various creatures. The imagery is vivid, and the tone is playful and thought-provoking. You weave together nature and introspection beautifully. Brilliantly written!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 2:02:00 AM
thanks anne, this is so true, may be i am the one , unhappy, birds feel that wishes
Date: 8/13/2025 5:26:00 PM
thought provoking poem, Yann. I agree with hubby, Bill, animals are quite adaptive and happy...yet we humans suffer from a certain angst whenever we're not in control...a shame. Loved the depth of your poem...have a great evening, Sara
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 2:03:00 AM
thanks sara for understanding the message, and support wishes
Date: 8/13/2025 4:07:00 PM
This is deep and interesting, I am getting accustomed to your style...:)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 2:04:00 AM
thanks a lot for the supportive words, will try to be better as a poet and man wishes
Date: 8/13/2025 4:02:00 PM
Animals seem to accept their destiny better than human, Yann. For some reason, we humans think we are in control most of time but seldom are in control. Your poem gives us each something to think about, my friend. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, to my French poet friend.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/16/2025 2:06:00 AM
thanks Bill, for the supportive and wise comment, i do the best i can, to understand the world, nature is helpful for me wishes

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