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End of Fall Hiku

a fall leaf f l o a t s I hear melancholy notes . . . snow drifts d o w n

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/19/2025 7:02:00 PM

The visual motion of the words mirrors the gentle descent of the season—so delicate, yet filled with quiet emotion. A lovely, evocative haiku.

Francis J Grasso

Date: 7/3/2025 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your first-place win, Andrea. You are amazing!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2025 9:28:00 PM

Well, thank you!

Emilia James

Date: 7/3/2025 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrea : )

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/3/2025 4:07:00 AM

Congrats, Andrea ~

Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 7/2/2025 4:52:00 PM

Wow! the content and style are both brilliant. Congrats, dear Ma'am Rea.

JCB Brul

Date: 7/2/2025 4:37:00 PM

Oh, this is so adorable! Keep writing like this dear Andie, it's very therapeutic! Congratulations ^___^JCB

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/2/2025 8:47:00 AM

Very creative and well-crafted haiku. In just a few syllables, you said a lot. Hearty congratulations on your trophy win

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/2/2025 7:20:00 AM

Congrats on a well-deserved win, Andrea! Janice

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 7/2/2025 2:46:00 AM

This is deserving of the win. Well done.

Howard Kerr

Date: 7/2/2025 1:20:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your first place selection with this lyrical luminous hiku. Howard

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/30/2025 11:00:00 AM

Ohh...me like Andrea. :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/28/2025 12:51:00 PM

A creative write that paints a vivid picture in few words.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/28/2025 11:11:00 AM

Lovely image!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2025 11:36:00 AM

Creative one. They seem to be the rage. We never know what will be going on next with design. Reads like a good contender if for a contest. Way to go. Sara K

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/27/2025 2:07:00 AM

Fascinating form -- yes, each season must sigh a bit, when parting -- till the next spectacular! Great for the skiers! Great imagery.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/26/2025 11:23:00 PM

Such a solemn and beautiful poem, this is, sweet Andrea! I love how you've knitted the yarns if melancholy here, in such a subtle and picturesque way, as if poignancy is seeping in the veins of nature. I absolutely adore everything about this, especially the opening how you've written "a fall leaf f l o a t s" and those "melancholy notes" sound so lyrical with the effortless flow of your words. You are a queen of haikus, as you do them so well! Loved reading this, the swift transition of seasons and emotions which you've reflected here in a heartfelt way! It should do really well in the contest!! Sending many best wishes :) a FAV

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2025 8:17:00 PM

Very creatively done --- even if you did use the four-letter word that starts with 'sn...' lol. Give me any season other than winter, PLEASE. lol. ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/26/2025 2:16:00 PM

Love the contrast and change of seasons.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2025 11:47:00 AM

What a fun read and creative Haiku write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. I can't wait to see Fall. Have a fun day writing away...............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/26/2025 11:38:00 AM

Love it, Andrea! Your visuals and rhyme are perfect! So creative, but as summer arrives I'm having a hard time thinking about fall and snow! Oh well. I still love this haiku. Blessings!