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January 26th 2025

Host; Suzette Richards

Pickup lines for Valentine Poetry Contest.

Once a Knight

Sweet Mary you’re such a delight
beautiful on this starry night
  A vision for sure
  You are quite demure 
Can I be your captive White Knight?

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/7/2024 12:02:00 AM

I'm sure the answer was a resounding YES! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 2/26/2024 10:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Rick! I beg she said yes! :-) Nice limerick poetry, my friend. Bill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2024 4:27:00 AM

Thanks Bill.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2024 1:16:00 PM

So sweet. Congrats on your win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2024 4:05:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/29/2024 11:34:00 PM

Such a great limerick Richard with perfect recited flow. I’m loving reading all the limericks at the moment and this is one of the best I’ve come across. Really enjoyed with a smile upon my face. Thank you :):)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2024 4:05:00 PM

That’s sweet, thanks.

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/29/2024 8:23:00 PM

Smart and natural romancing. I believe you've got this one. Richard, very nice, Congratulations on your win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2024 9:13:00 PM

Much appreciated.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2024 7:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Sara K

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2024 1:57:00 PM

Thanks Sara.

Suzette Richards

Date: 1/29/2024 4:55:00 AM

Romance is alive and well. Congratulations on your placement, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2024 1:58:00 PM

Thanks Suzette.;0)

Bill Baker

Date: 1/27/2024 9:48:00 PM

A romantic limerick, Rick. I like it! Bill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2024 1:58:00 PM

Thanks Bill.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/27/2024 2:07:00 PM

So romantic Richard. Bring back the days of romance and chivalry. Good Luck in the Contest. Reads like a winner to me. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2024 3:37:00 PM

You are kind. I’ll cross my fingers.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/27/2024 12:24:00 PM

Richardd! I love thislimerick! Huggs, Pangie xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2024 3:38:00 PM

Thanks and hugs back to you.

Silent One

Date: 1/27/2024 12:15:00 PM

Very sweet Richard..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2024 3:38:00 PM

Thanks.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2024 5:56:00 AM

Just the right touch, Richard-- wonderfully inviting poem in allure of romance!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2024 10:48:00 AM

Thanks Vijay.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/26/2024 8:17:00 PM

A romantic limerick that is quite different. It brings smiles.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 8:58:00 PM

I’m glad I could bring a smile.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/26/2024 8:11:00 PM

Ah who could resist the idea of a white knight; so lighthearted, and great phrase there as pickup lines!! I love your rhymes too. I bet this will do very well as it is so neatly done and brilliant!! Made me smile too. Best wishes. Pleasure reading

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2024 8:58:00 PM

That’s sweet, thanks.