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January 26th 2025

Host; Suzette Richards

Pickup lines for Valentine Poetry Contest.

Once a Knight

Sweet Mary you’re such a delight
beautiful on this starry night
  A vision for sure
  You are quite demure 
Can I be your captive White Knight?

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Eileen Manassian

December 7, 2024 at 12:02 AM

I'm sure the answer was a resounding YES! :)

Bill Baker

February 26, 2024 at 10:35 PM

Congrats on your win, Rick! I beg she said yes! :-) Nice limerick poetry, my friend. Bill

Richard Lamoureux

February 27, 2024 at 4:27 AM

Thanks Bill.

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2024 at 1:16 PM

So sweet. Congrats on your win.

Richard Lamoureux

January 30, 2024 at 4:05 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Christina Bowring

January 29, 2024 at 11:34 PM

Such a great limerick Richard with perfect recited flow. I’m loving reading all the limericks at the moment and this is one of the best I’ve come across. Really enjoyed with a smile upon my face. Thank you :):)

Richard Lamoureux

January 30, 2024 at 4:05 PM

That’s sweet, thanks.

I Am Anaya

January 29, 2024 at 8:23 PM

Smart and natural romancing. I believe you've got this one. Richard, very nice, Congratulations on your win!

Richard Lamoureux

January 29, 2024 at 9:13 PM

Much appreciated.

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2024 at 7:30 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Sara K

Richard Lamoureux

January 29, 2024 at 1:57 PM

Thanks Sara.

Suzette Richards

January 29, 2024 at 4:55 AM

Romance is alive and well. Congratulations on your placement, Richard

Richard Lamoureux

January 29, 2024 at 1:58 PM

Thanks Suzette.;0)

Bill Baker

January 27, 2024 at 9:48 PM

A romantic limerick, Rick. I like it! Bill

Richard Lamoureux

January 29, 2024 at 1:58 PM

Thanks Bill.

Suzanne Delaney

January 27, 2024 at 2:07 PM

So romantic Richard. Bring back the days of romance and chivalry. Good Luck in the Contest. Reads like a winner to me. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

January 27, 2024 at 3:37 PM

You are kind. I’ll cross my fingers.

Panagiota Romios

January 27, 2024 at 12:24 PM

Richardd! I love thislimerick! Huggs, Pangie xx

Richard Lamoureux

January 27, 2024 at 3:38 PM

Thanks and hugs back to you.

Silent One

January 27, 2024 at 12:15 PM

Very sweet Richard..

Richard Lamoureux

January 27, 2024 at 3:38 PM

Thanks.

Vijay Pandit

January 27, 2024 at 5:56 AM

Just the right touch, Richard-- wonderfully inviting poem in allure of romance!

Richard Lamoureux

January 27, 2024 at 10:48 AM

Thanks Vijay.

Hilda Greenhough

January 26, 2024 at 8:17 PM

A romantic limerick that is quite different. It brings smiles.

Richard Lamoureux

January 26, 2024 at 8:58 PM

I’m glad I could bring a smile.

Ink Empress

January 26, 2024 at 8:11 PM

Ah who could resist the idea of a white knight; so lighthearted, and great phrase there as pickup lines!! I love your rhymes too. I bet this will do very well as it is so neatly done and brilliant!! Made me smile too. Best wishes. Pleasure reading

Richard Lamoureux

January 26, 2024 at 8:58 PM

That’s sweet, thanks.