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Poetry has been my passion since my retirement from an accountancy based career a dozen years ago. I currently live in South Africa and this rainbow nation has inspired many of my poems. I also have British nationality and embrace their grammar and spelling, but I read widely and am not fazed by strict grammar rules: A pavement/sidewalk; glasses/eyeglasses; judgement/judgment, et cetera; they are one and the same to me when I read poetry. To date, I have self-published a number of books, including the poetry anthology by international poets, © Time, 2014 ISBN 978-0-620-60578-6, and have been cited in many international publications, both poetry journals, as well as in scholarly handbooks. Some of my short stories have been published in international electronic publications, and one of my novellas had been short-listed for an Afrikaans SA publication.

I serve on the Board of Advisers, of Taleemi Baithak. (See my blog, Words of Wisdom, 29 September 2023.)

I have a number of poetic forms to my credit, notably, Suzette Prime (listed here on PoetrySoup), as well as Suzette sonnet.

My most recent books which include examples of my poetry as well as notes regarding poetry - available directly from me:

  1. © The Eutony of Words, 2018 ISBN 978-0-6399382-0-2
  2. © Docendo discimus, 2021 (Revised 2023) ISBN 978-0-620-95432-7
  3. © Flight of Thoughts, 2023 ISBN 978-0-6397-8880-7
  4. © Downtown - Poetic Devices, 2023 ISBN 978-0-7961-1968-1
  5.  © Rocking Poetry, 2033 ISBN 978-0-7961-2824-9

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Nursery Rhymes - The Sequel

Blog Posted:4/19/2024 9:05:00 PM

Humpty Dumpty, by Suzette Richards – image generated 4/4/2024


 

Recent children's poetry has been confined to the medium of picture books and, as a result, aimed at younger children as the audience. However, a number of children literature contain puns or homophones often only intelligible to the adult reader.

Have you ever wondered ‘What next?’, or ‘What if?’ when you have read a nursery rhyme—they often end abruptly. For example: There are different interpretations of Humpty Dumpty (a cannon or an egg).

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall.
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.
All the king's horses and all the king's men
Couldn't put Humpty together again.

 

Humpty Dumpty is often portrayed as an egg with human characteristics (an example of anthropomorphism); first described as such by Lewis Carroll in his book ‘Through the Looking-Glass’ (1871). It is in fact a riddle and war historians reckon that the answer is ‘a cannon’. Humpty Dumpty was popularised in the United States on Broadway by actor George L. Fox in the pantomime musical ‘Humpty Dumpty’. The show ran from 1868 to 1869.

***

Hey diddle diddle,
The cat and the fiddle,
The cow jumped over the moon,
The little dog laughed to see such sport,
And the dish ran away with the spoon.

 

This rhyme is thought to date from the sixteenth century when a reference to it was made in a play by Thomas Preston. Its meaning is unclear but has been suggested to refer to

a. The Israelites flight from Egypt

b. Various constellations

c. Catherine of Aragon

d. Catherine the Great

e. A complaint against Catholic priests

f. It has no meaning at all and is a nonsense rhyme

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Why does the lamb love Mary so? Mary so, Mary so?

Why does the lamb love Mary so? The eager children smiled.

Mary loves the lamb, you know. Lamb, you know, lamb, you know.

Mary loves the lamb, you know. The teacher’s happy smile.

 

Sarah began teaching young boys and girls in a small school not far from her home (in Newport, New Hampshire). It was at this small school that the incident involving 'Mary's Lamb' is reputed to have taken place. Sarah was surprised one morning to see one of her students, a girl named Mary, enter the classroom followed by her pet lamb. The visitor was far too distracting to be permitted to remain in the building and so Sarah turned him out. The lamb stayed nearby till school was dismissed and then ran up to Mary looking for attention and protection. The other youngsters wanted to know why the lamb loved Mary so much and their teacher explained it was because Mary loved her pet. Then Sarah used the incident to get a moral across to the class (see the above original poem).

***

WEEKEND CHALLENGE: I hope this blog has inspired you to look with fresh eyes at nursery rhymes and maybe even write a sequel to one of your favourite ones. You may post the title of your poem here under comments. Unfortunately we can’t post the actual link to our poems under the comments.

MY POEM (adult content): Humpty Dumpty - The Sequel (poetrysoup.com)

Happy quills!

Suzette

 



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Date: 4/22/2024 9:11:00 AM
Nice blog. I think nursery rhymes are so important for children. Since my mom read so many to me, it's probably why I enjoy rhyme and meter so much today.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/22/2024 9:40:00 AM
A good introduction to poetry :)
Date: 4/21/2024 2:45:00 AM
informative blog, Suzette. I will share with you that my dear mother (who had an affinity for metaphors) told me about the metaphors well disguised in children's nursery rhymes. My favorite is "Row, Row, Row Your Boat...Life is But a Dream" -- I wrote a blog years ago about the hidden message within those words. Is life just an illusion, a dream? I ramble. Thanks for your blog post.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/21/2024 3:58:00 AM
Have you got the title and date of that blog? I would be interested to read it, Sara. When we daydream, we are fully in sync with nature - just my take ...
Date: 4/20/2024 5:36:00 AM
I actually wrote a follow up to Humpty and introduced a new character, Sam Dumpty, a detective who investigates his brother's untimely demise. I've actually done takes on a half dozen or more nursery rhymes. Jim Slaughter has done a number as well
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/20/2024 10:41:00 AM
Oh my gosh both of those short stories are mine. I guess when you delete your account short stories remain, albeit anon. I wonder what else may be lurking from the past?
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/20/2024 9:34:00 AM
I don't have any of them posted here currently
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/20/2024 9:21:00 AM
There is a short story about Detective Sam Dumpty, but no author listed.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/20/2024 9:18:00 AM
It sounds like a lot of fun. What is the name of your Sam Dumpty poem?

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