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3/20/2018 6:29:16 PM
This place is a joke	I am new to the world of poetry and thought as this site is for all levels of poetry I would not only be able to read some great work but receive some some constructive criticism to help me further grow. I would love for someone to read my poems and be objective. And love to provide my thoughts and honest opinions but I do fear them not worthy as I am no professional.
3/25/2018 7:47:02 AM
Hi! I’m NEW! PLEASE CRITIQUE POEMS So I learn	UNRELENTING How does my body This flesh that withholds my soul,, manage to bear the weight from the chains that have been embedded upon my bequeathing heart? Where does one hide the pain that is encrusted upon these eyes that are dreary and now fail to sleep? Why cant my mind acquit, my heart adrift, my skin ache for the touch of another? Does it have to be me that has to live with this night, because happiness is the other side of this mirror? h
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