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EOTrees - all messages by user

10/19/2022 8:08:39 PM
I need help finishing this poem or starting a new	If this is the way that you, yourself would like to leave it then by all means do so. as for myself, I could be reediting this poem so many times that I would have 13 pages of editing but this is the way I do me and mine. edited by EOTrees on 10/19/2022
10/19/2022 8:14:01 PM
MOST BEAUTIFUL PERSON	Arjun Jangid wrote: Please give your opinion
10/19/2022 8:36:43 PM
MOST BEAUTIFUL PERSON	I am going to be as raw and real with you, this is a good poem but it could use some editing. Your structure and stanzas are very well put together just do some reediting and If it gets publised and it could possibly do so, I will be at your book signing.
10/19/2022 8:42:47 PM
looking for feedback	I am right here to give you and anyone else my feedback, because I want you and anyone to point out what I seemed to lack, We all write and this should bring us all closer together. This is our community and this makes us family,
10/19/2022 9:06:27 PM
An introduction.	Hello to each and everyone, my name is E.O.-Tree"s Myles and I am 62 years old, I am a disabled veteran. I have been married twice, I have 3 amazing grown children, 2 men, 1 beautiful daughter. 6 amazing and lively grand babies, 3 young men who are my life, 3 beautiful, gorgeous grand daughters they are ready made divas. My children and grandbabies are so hilarious, they remind me of myself and my children. I have been writing poetry since grade school, read some of my poems and feedback me immediately.
10/21/2022 9:35:50 PM
I'm at your mercy	I truly love this poem, your name such be Grace because this poem is amazing. I love your style and choice of words, how it all comes together in all the right ways. I'll be yor follower until the end because you are so brillant so are is this poem. E.O.-Tree"s Myles
10/21/2022 9:38:30 PM
brainstorming technique -clustering.	I myself have never heard of this technique? what is it?
10/22/2022 11:40:18 AM
What's wrong with my poem	There is absolutely, absolutely nothing wrong with this poem but maybe just a little editing.
10/22/2022 11:53:26 AM
Please I need honesty. Is this contest worthy?	This one of the modt sincere and raw poems that I've read so far. true and real. I would follow you anywhere till the very end. Brillant and well stated. Thank you.
10/22/2022 12:14:46 PM
Please critique my work.	This is a interesting piece and it pinched my curiosity, there's nothing wrong maybe some editing. I love the theme and it made me feel as though I saw that battle. keep this masterpiece work right up.
10/22/2022 12:18:21 PM
Feedback needed. Any/all input appreciated	To be honest, I just love your flow of rhymes, you didn't get hung up or stuttered. If you feel as though there's something missing, look it over again and do a tiny bit of editing, but it seems flow free to me. love it.
10/22/2022 12:21:35 PM
Please help critique my poem	I get it but please, take your time and do some editing with taking your time, be patient.
10/22/2022 12:24:13 PM
My First Tear	Please just take time to think about what you are saying and how you want this beautiful to come together. I stress editing and patience and taking your time about just how you want it to sound and flow.
10/22/2022 12:27:09 PM
Special	This is a special poem but do just a little editing and you will realize just how special this poem would mean to other readers. Beautiful.
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