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richardpoor
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11/19/2014 12:48:43 PM
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richard poor...just a poet
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I am what I am...a liver of life....
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12/14/2014 12:58:53 PM
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i get alot of reads but hardly any feedback...
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I like to know if my writes are good or bad
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1/4/2015 12:17:42 PM
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almost new here...
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I have been writing since I was 7...won the eastern queens poetry contest at 13...never had any formal training as a poet,but I believe we are given this gift and so should use it,to expand the thoughts and hearts of those who read it....
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1/9/2015 10:28:05 AM
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Dolly Voodoo
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hi...ok.eing a man of voodoo I get this, it just needs some tuning...take out a lot of your "ands"..try to condense it all down,but your idea is great
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1/9/2015 10:29:32 AM
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tin man
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tin man the brutal echoes resound within of being the way i am not softly, but as a din of all that i cannot understand, i have rusted and stayed without thought of movement how from the path i have strayed so far from any soothant, for when i was made my maker forgot a part that where love cannot fade so i search for my heart........
Read more at: /poem/tin_man_629726
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