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11/19/2014 12:48:43 PM
richard poor...just a poet I am what I am...a liver of life....
12/14/2014 12:58:53 PM
i get alot of reads but hardly any feedback... I like to know if my writes are good or bad
1/4/2015 12:17:42 PM
almost new here... I have been writing since I was 7...won the eastern queens poetry contest at 13...never had any formal training as a poet,but I believe we are given this gift and so should use it,to expand the thoughts and hearts of those who read it....
1/9/2015 10:28:05 AM
Dolly Voodoo hi...ok.eing a man of voodoo I get this, it just needs some tuning...take out a lot of your "ands"..try to condense it all down,but your idea is great
1/9/2015 10:29:32 AM
tin man tin man the brutal echoes resound within of being the way i am not softly, but as a din of all that i cannot understand, i have rusted and stayed without thought of movement how from the path i have strayed so far from any soothant, for when i was made my maker forgot a part that where love cannot fade so i search for my heart........

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