Here is a stinker of mine!!
Blog Posted by
Deb Wilson: 4/25/2013 3:10:00 PM
I have many poems I think are not good enough for others to lay eyes on! But this particular one I do not like at all ...I guess at the time I wrote it I did like it but now I think it stinks! What do you all think...don't worry I won't be hurt Hahaha!
THE MADDENING CROWD
They say if you're tense
just picture them naked.
You don't feel clued in
creatively fake it.
Reconsider both sides;
look up-don't look down.
Mad waters could take you
crash you up from the sound.
And your voice might be lying;
seems your thoughts are too loud.
Far away from the quiet's
how you drown out the crowd.