Deep hidden meaning (NOT) in this raspberry!!!

Blog Posted by Deb Wilson: 4/29/2013 5:14:00 AM

The pity is I thought there was such a rich meaning when I wrote this...now I'm thinking WHAT THE **** does this even mean!!! Well here goes....

Pandora's A Friend Of Mine

It seems I can't forgive myself
for chasing Alice's rabbit.
I slipped and fell in the wishing well
and started a life-long habit.

I want everything-I want you.
I'll open the package to see what's inside.
I want that beautiful rainbow too.
I want everything-I want you.

Curiously it seems I feel
surrounded by doubt-you've seen it no doubt.
But luckily I found the key
to unlock Pandora's box for me.

I want everything-I want you.
I'll open the package to see what's inside.
I want that beautiful rainbow too.
I want everything-I want you.

First of all but most of all
this has been the hardest fall.
Moments are milestones-milestones are many.
Looking for endings -well I haven't any.

wow you read the whole thing! Sorry about that!!

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Debra
Mundine

Date: 4/30/2013 7:04:00 PM

I found the poem very interesting. It seems to hint at something or someone forbidden. Or maybe I'm misinterpreting the meaning. The theme and flow sort of compels one to read further.

Deb
Wilson

Date: 4/29/2013 10:59:00 PM

well maybe I am being too hard on myself by what you've all said ! It's just not one of my faves I guess..a song you say? hmmnn...

Andrea
Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2013 3:09:00 PM

Except for a disconnect with the final stanza and the rest of the poem, this was not bad, Deb! I enjoyed the repetition of I want everything - I want you.

Poet Destroyer
A

Date: 4/29/2013 9:17:00 AM

wow, Deb, this is not a bad poem. I don't whats hidden or what we seek when it comes to happiness.... and yes I read the whole thing and enjoyed~ Linda

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