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Do We, As Artists, Have The Right to Change Our Work?

Blog Posted by Just That Archaic Poet: 12/23/2013 11:12:00 AM

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Date: 12/23/2013 10:53:00 PM
Wow, I never thought of it this way. I told a friend this morning, I belong to everyone :-)... So, I have to stand by the fame ... "WE THE PEOPLE" <---- xox... LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:45:00 AM
I hadn't thought about it that way either until I watched the documentary and it got me thinking. I don't think there's anything wrong with your perspective at all. I guess it all depends on the artist. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Linda :)
Date: 12/23/2013 7:42:00 PM
If the work was my own original,...I feel justified to alter, tweak it as much as I think might improve it. It is still mine. I have done that since day one, since I've joined the Soup. I often take a look at a poem that seemed "right" at the time.....go back a few days later, and make changes if I think they might be better......even after I've entered a contest. Perhaps that drives the judges nuts? I don't know, but, often reviewing my own work, I see something awkward, or missing, or lacking. Sometimes a poem needs to simmer on the stove for awhile, before calling it "done". (That's how it works for me, at least)...
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:45:00 PM
Very true, Carrie...I often do same...
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Date: 12/24/2013 10:03:00 AM
Dang, should say * "I understand your point of view"*
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:46:00 AM
An understand point of view, Carrie, and I am inclined to agree with you. Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion! :)
Date: 12/23/2013 6:42:00 PM
tHE ARTIST OWNS HIS OR HER CREATIONS, AS TO PAINTERS MANY, oopsie, many, many artist painted over their other work, there might be 3 layers of painting on a single canvass
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:48:00 AM
This is true, Debbie. I'm glad this blog has generated discussion (that was my hope). I wouldn't like to be told I cannot change or tweak something I can improve upon just because the reader likes the original verse, etc. Thanks for your insights! :)
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/23/2013 8:04:00 PM
Glad to hear this. I've done it many times :)
Date: 12/23/2013 5:31:00 PM
When my daughter was in high school, a piece of her art was selected to design the cover of a school magazine. The teacher told my daughter to make some changes to the design (because the teacher thought her own idea would improve the piece). My daughter came home very upset and said she didn't want to change the design, but was also afraid of upsetting the teacher. I told her that it was perfectly fine to tell the teacher no and that is exactly what she did. I was very proud of her for taking a stand and doing what she thought was right. I have re-edited poems I've posted here even after comments have been made.
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:49:00 AM
Good for her! I always liked the adage of "If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything." Thanks for reading and sharing your anecdote, K :)
Date: 12/23/2013 1:54:00 PM
Actually, PS has no controls or even any audit of what you have changed in a poem. I always thought it would be a good practical joke to win first place in a contest and as soon as the results were posted, change my poem that won with a complete piece of crap.
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:52:00 AM
LOL@ Andrea! xD
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:51:00 AM
Funny thought, Roy. I wasn't implicating TPS here, though, as far as changes or revisions go. But thanks for sharing your humorous idea ;)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/23/2013 4:57:00 PM
hahaha. Please don't ever do that in one of MY contests.
Date: 12/23/2013 1:51:00 PM
I think the mood..life..mind..thoughts of a persona change during the years,so does his artistry and creations.I do believe He reserves the right to do any changes He likes ..Of course doing such changes He knows He 's challeging himself to please the public viewers in an innovative way.It is risky and can go both ways..For better..for worse..But every artist loves challenges and risks I guess.
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:52:00 AM
Much agreed, Charm! Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion! :)
Date: 12/23/2013 1:49:00 PM
We need to remember that episode IV was the first movie, and no expectations had been made at that time. I think Lucas copped out for political reasons in order to redeem the image of Solo as one of the "good guys". There was no discernable improvement to the movie. I have no problem with a revision if it's done for artistic reasons. In any case, I would have to hold on to a poem for at least 2 years to not be held guilty of artistic disintegrity if I could not make tweaks after it was published.
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Date: 12/24/2013 8:54:00 AM
I agree with you, Roy. I didn't like the fact that Lucas changed the very nature of Solo via that one scene alone. But changing that scene didn't alter my lifelong perception of him. Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion :)
Date: 12/23/2013 1:36:00 PM
Just so there is NO confusion, I hope everyone understands that I side with Lucas on this matter, that an artist reserves the right to change their work. I'm just posing a philosophical question here and will be responding to everyone's comments and insights soon. Thanks, ~Chan
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Date: 12/23/2013 12:35:00 PM
Poetry is a classic example of sometimes having to change ones work. One day words laid down appear to have a firm foundation as delivered that day. The next day, ones work may require tweaked. As being the Artist, it's he/she's given right to alter as they see fit. <*> As for the Star Wars question. Again if the Artist sees fit, then do it. What's changed may not be ideal to whomever, but it may be ideal to many others. Just my thoughts......
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Date: 12/24/2013 9:08:00 AM
I agree, James. Thanks for reading my blog and sharing your opinion :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/23/2013 1:53:00 PM
Hi James..Merry Christmas.to you and your loved ones...Hope you re back at the soup for good..
Date: 12/23/2013 12:17:00 PM
Firstly I have never seen Star Wars so I have no idea about the scene you describe, secondly any artist has the right to change whatever they want to in THEIR work…as many times as they like surely it just adds another reason to view it again?
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Date: 12/24/2013 9:09:00 AM
Agreed, David. Thanks for adding your opinion to the discussion :)
Date: 12/23/2013 11:42:00 AM
Well , this certainly made me think and mull over some options but in the end i believe that the artist reserves the right to alter his work and as long as its on his terms and not under the judgement of others. Whether we are fans or not it is not our creation and therefore, not for us to decide. We may not like the alteration but if we respect the artist original genius, then we should also accept that his alteration wil remain in that same genius context. Just one poets opinion, Carl
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Date: 12/23/2013 11:59:00 AM
I appreciate that you read my blog, Carl; thanks for your insightful comments. I agree with what you have to say. Thanks for the reply :)

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