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My Biography is Coming Soon...I don't know  what to write in my biography.  6 years old.  Walking in the drizzling  rain.  Jumping from puddle to juicy  puddle. Finally, the CANDY STORE.  LEMME  GET some of  deezee  after I finished with my choices I gave Poncho 2 dollars.  Ok it was  1 dollar and plenty of coins.  Now I figured I had to put some candy to the side for my self.   I took four  Maryjanes  and stuffed  them deep into my pocket.  Then my pumpkin seeds went into my jacket pocket.  Running  back home. I hit every puddle I could hit.  We lived on the 4th floor. I had  3 siblings. I pressed the bell as though I was being chased.  Before I entered the  apartment I was  ambushed.  GIMME, GIMME VAL.,  HEGGIES DOWN  I said.   It means  don't  beg.   Oh,  Val  your  so  stingy.   I turned around , ok , you can have some footsie rolls.  I gave WANDA some footsie rolls.  Well.... After waking up out of the nightmare.  I became a 13 year old poet.  I wrote lyrics to songs.  Wasn't any good. Finally at  22 I wrote one poem that was satisfactory.  It was part of my manuscript.  I mailed a copy to a publishing company.  I'm sure they did not approve of it. They mailed me a , WE REGRET TO INFORM YOU LETTER.   This one poem I remembered :    A dimpled splash of gray on a fridges November MORNING.   I can't  recall the whole poem . That my story  as I grew up, I appreciated nature and words reading and writing  alot more.


Blog Posted:4/17/2017 5:56:00 PM

Living with my name insistently and with grievous potency I aspire just a TICKLE bit.  A tinge.  How would,  how could FAME find me.   I wanted  fame to ask for my autograph.

It shouldn't be to much longer before crowds of  PHOTOGRAPHERS with exploding cameras and  star seekers bombarded my door.  Well  here's the  gist of it.  I've been waiting for fame for years  now.  I  thought I could  Persue acting.   Yes,  I'd be an actor instead of  actress.  There aren't  any doctresses  living today,  Are there?

I chose not to chase that dream.  I knew I would be painted as just another up and coming.  Besides I didn't want to find my lips planted on any old John Doe.Or maybe.... Jane Doe  in an awkard  scene  with a script  I fail to remember even after 20 trial. Hmm.  Naah!!

At one time for a spot of a second ....Ooh, wait... you're thinking I'm much to SHALLOW.  Ridiculousness,  I'm more than shallow!  Living with my name?  I'm  down right exceedingly  conceited.  I thought  at first it was unbearable living with my name, until I uncovered thousands of people with the same name.

I recalled twisting my mind around the unmentionable concept.  Why not start a club with my name sake.  A club of  Valeries'.  Is that more shallow than anything else.  I'm only striving  to be me. You can quote me.  I'm telling you I've tried avoiding it but what's the use?   I'M GOING FOR THE  GENNIUSSE BOOK of the most deeply  shallowest  person of all.

Might I just be named the most conceited? Well, cheers to all of my fans, who cherish my success.

Now, I make only one request, please find every word of this is only in jest.

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Date: 4/20/2017 8:10:00 AM
Yes Val...one can look around and easily see...pursuit only, of ones selfish interest divides our connection with others...creating an environment where abuse of community is obtainable (air/water quality/education/health and human services...etc) making it far more difficult to prevent and oppose when people are not united!
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10/20/2017 INSANE PLEASURE OF A LOVE Cinquainfor her,joy,love,lust,
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10/6/2017 SIGHTS AND SOUNDS AT DUSK Free verseabsence,autumn,day,poetry
9/27/2017 SPRING THE SPARKLING Cinquainearth,environment,footbal
9/22/2017 ONE MOST BEAUTIFUL Prose Poetrybeautiful,beauty,good mor
9/20/2017 DO YOU REMEMBER THOSE TIMES Proseabsence,america,angst,
9/11/2017 HOLLER Cinquainanger,angst,boy,brother,c
9/8/2017 AIN'T NOTHING BUT A CAKE WALK Free verseanger,angst,anxiety,child
9/7/2017 THIS CONFESSION Sonnetcelebration,imagination,l
9/1/2017 ONE MORE LOVE POEM Free verselove,poems,
8/30/2017 LOOK AT HER Free versebeauty,imagery,love,summe
8/29/2017 PICTURE THE SUN Cinquaindark,day,senses,sky,sunse
8/23/2017 IF THERE WAS NO POETRY PART II Prose Poetrydream,poetry,
8/17/2017 HEAVENS DREAM Prose Poetrybirth,happy,
8/15/2017 IF YOU SLAP ME Tankaanger,anxiety,forgiveness
8/15/2017 HEARTACHE TAKES A HOLIDAY Prose Poetrydecember,girlfriend,longi
8/9/2017 UNBELIEVABLE NOTIONS Free verseart,desire,love,
8/4/2017 THERE SHE GOES AGAIN Sonnetfor her,french,love,
8/2/2017 YOU ARE NATURE'S WAY Sonnetflower,nature,
7/30/2017 SALACIOUS AUTUMN NIGHTS Sonnetautumn,care,love,together
7/26/2017 THE ONLY DREAM Sonnethope,life,love,
7/14/2017 BLACK CHILD Prose Poetryangst,blessing,child,fait
7/9/2017 THERE SHE GOES Sonnetheart,lost,sensual,
6/28/2017 THE END OF CHILDHOOD Sonnetbirthday,feelings,goodbye
6/26/2017 SOME DAY IS HERE Sonnetcelebration,fate,goodbye,
6/24/2017 LOVE IS THESE THINGS Free versebeautiful,desire,devotion
6/19/2017 WITHOUT MERCY Free versebody,image,kiss,love,lust
6/17/2017 THIS IS ALL BECAUSE I'M HAPPY Free versehappiness,happy,humor,
6/15/2017 RAW LOVE CELEBRATION Sonnetcelebration,happy,rose,
6/12/2017 HEAT STROKES OF THE HEART Free verseabsence,games,girlfriend,
6/7/2017 THE QUIET Sonnetangst,anxiety,june,muse,
6/5/2017 POETRY LIFE Sonnetangst,creation,i am,self,
5/30/2017 MY HOME MY LOVE JONES Sonnetart,freedom,home,imaginat
5/29/2017 HEART BEAT Sonnetbeauty,emotions,joy,true
5/25/2017 PLATINUM DAWN Alliterationdark,night,sky,
5/22/2017 DO YOU KNOW ME Sonnetabsence,celebrity,devotio
5/21/2017 REGARDING OUR FEELINGS Free versecare,feelings,
5/19/2017 LOVE ROLLERCOASTER Free versecare,conflict,feelings,he
5/17/2017 THE PROSE OF DEVASTATION Prose Poetrydream,earth,faith,voyage,
5/15/2017 I AM A POET Free versecreation,heart,poems,poet
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5/5/2017 A SECRET DEVOTION Prose Poetryconflict,emotions,love,mo
4/28/2017 LOVE DISEUR Prose Poetrybeauty,love,lust,
4/24/2017 BUT LOVE STILL ENDURES Sonnetemotions,love,
4/23/2017 TELL ME Sonnetabsence,blue,courage,emot
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4/20/2017 ADDED TO THE LIST OF BEAUTIFUL THINGS Prose Poetrybeautiful,celebration,day
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4/20/2017 STROLLING Haikuday,simple,
4/19/2017 WHEN Tankacare,humanity,
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4/19/2017 THE PAUPER'S MOON Sonnetloneliness,moon,poverty,s
4/18/2017 THE SUN THE FLAWLESS ONE Sonnetdark,day,sun,sunset,
4/15/2017 SHY LITTLE LULLABY Tankagoodbye,kiss,sky,
4/15/2017 MY BABY STROLLING ON MONDAY Haikubaby,home,kindergarten,li
4/15/2017 JUST A COUPLE OF HAIKUS Haikubeauty,green,growth,happy
4/14/2017 THE HUSTLER Tankabeauty,celebrity,characte
4/14/2017 LOVE AND OTHER THINGS Acrosticanxiety,death,feelings,he
4/11/2017 UNIQUE Acrosticbeauty,love,
4/10/2017 UNBRIDLED LOVE Sonnetangel,character,feelings,
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4/3/2017 STREETS OF SUMMER DREAMS Alliterationcar,happy,summer,sunshine
4/2/2017 MAGIC A DREAM Sonnetimagery,love,
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3/31/2017 STILL A MAVERICK Sonneti am,life,passion,
3/31/2017 HOPE OF IMMORTALITY Sonnetdeath,hope,
3/29/2017 BLOOM AND BLOOM AGAIN Sonnetkiss,
3/28/2017 FROM THE HEARTS OF ANGELS Sonnetangel,faith,heart,i am,lo
3/27/2017 SUMMER LOVERS TENDER MERCIES Sonnetheart,july,night,summer,
3/25/2017 IMAGINATION OF VAL Acrosticart,color,magic,nature,pa
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3/15/2017 I FEEL LIKE A ROSE Sonnetbeauty,blue,care,day,flow
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3/1/2017 IN EVERY FOREVER Sonnetcare,courage,day,destiny,
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2/20/2017 LITTLE ALLITERATION SENTENCES Alliterationweather,winter,
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2/16/2017 WITHOUT LOVE Prose Poetrycare,happy,love,passion,
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2/10/2017 I DREAM IN POEMS Free versemoon,poems,star,
2/10/2017 WHEN I WRITE Tankaconfidence,
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2/1/2017 POET'S FIRE Haikucelebrity,desire,
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