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Best Poems Written by Brianna Long

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I Love You, I Promise You I Do

Take a breath, make a wish, that we can last forever
just promise me you wont ever say never
take my hand, take my heart, just don't break it
cause if you do, I don't think ill be able to make it
these days and nights never end for me
but we should be together, I know it was meant to be
I promise you that I love you with all my heart
I swear I do, it happened so fast, right from the start
I don't wanna fall right back down
ramming my face straight into the ground
don't worry about what other people say
because soon enough, they'll all just fade away
thinking of how I made you all mine
I fell so hard, so fast this time
so take my hand and lead the way
and tell me all you want me to do and say-
hold me tight and pull me near
and take away everything I have left to fear
you broke me out of my shell
and released me from my own personal hell
you make me happy, smiling a smile I'll never forget
as I think about the moment, from when we first met.

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Set Me Free

When I sit and look straight into your eyes
it reminds me of the bright stars that fill up these skies
I love you, and you love me
now take me away from this place so we can be free
I always think about you and your smile
cant stand the thought of being apart, not even for a mile
to fall in love with you was such an easy thing to do
from as soon as I first saw you, that was when I knew
just think of everything that we can be
so take my hand and walk with me
and set me free.

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Can Somebody Save Me

Of everything I gave up
Still feel like it’s not enough
Of everything I gave up
I’m left with no one to trust
Of everything I gave up
I feel like everything is burning to dust

Can somebody save me? 
I’m living in a bubble
Can somebody save me?
Is it worth all this trouble?
Can somebody save me?
Make this strain go away
Suffering through it, day after day
Can somebody save me?
On my knees, to the Lord I pray
When I begin, I don’t even know what to say
When I pray, “Dear Lord,” I say
“Please can you make this pain ago away?
This stress is ridiculous, it’s pointless
And I’m sick of it. 
For everything I stand for, been put through the ringer
But in return, all I got was the finger
And this pain won’t go away, it’ll just stay and linger
Oh please Lord, I can’t be that much of a sinner.”
Can somebody save me?
“but oh Lord, can’t you just end this game?
But you won’t, everything just stays the same
God, I’m on the brink of going insane
And it’s all because you wont take away my pain”

Of everything I gave up
Still feel like it’s not enough
Of everything I gave up
I’m left with no one to trust
Of everything I gave up
I feel like everything is burning to dust

Can somebody save me?
“Lord please save me, I’m hanging by a thread
My biggest enemy is my mind, as I’m slipping off the edge
As the problems grow bigger, the bigger the wedge
Dear Lord, did you hear what I just said?
No, you never answer, so now its time for bed”
Can somebody save me?
No… Amen.

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I Remember

I remember what you wore on our first day
you knew just exactly the right things to say
I remember all the looks that showed up on your face
everywhere we went, even the exact place
there was absolutely nothing that you could do
that would of prevented me from falling for you
I remember the way the butterflies made my stomach felt
when you looked me in the eyes, my heart started to instantly melt
if I could literally hand you and give you my heart
that deed would have been done from the beginning, right from the start
I promise you baby, that I have nothing to hide
I just want you to know what I feel deep down inside
I remember that spark from when we first met
introducing me to a feeling that I'll never regret
every night I lay in my bed
cant get you out of my mind, not out of my head
everything that I feel, feels like I'm in paradise
as I sit here and I always start to fantasize
when I'm with you,you shine as bright as a star
I love everything that you do, everything that you are
I need you, you make me stand strong
as you tell me to learn from what is right and what is wrong
and in the end of all this, I know that we truly do belong.

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Hide

Despising this life, all I do is hide
It was only seconds ago of when i last cried
I wiped off my eyes and opened them wide
What would it be like if I just died?

This would all be better if i never lied
in which i ended up losing all of my pride
I was stupid, I thought I'd let it slide
And from here on, my soul has been fried

I told him I needed help, I needed a guide
If only he could just put this all aside
I hate how every remark is just another snide
In the end of this all, i hope i wont get denied.

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A Lost Sad Little Girl

I wish life was easy
I wish it was fair
I hate every second
It's to much to bare
Looking in the mirror
I'll tell you what I see
A poor little girl,
Crying and begging to be free
Observing every detail,
the sadness upon her face
As she starts to reminisce 
all the obstacles she was forced to face
walking back and fourth
now she starts to pace
thinking how life is a crazy ride
and just one big race
a tear falls down her face
as she instantly starts to cry
the pain just hurts so bad
she just begs to die

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In Shape, In Place, In Line

The only thing I fear
is when you're not near
I cant stand to suffer through this pain
and all this stuff is making me go insane
I'm gonna do anything just to be with you
I'm gonna try to hold my ground, be bullet proof
ill never let you down again
and ill do anything just to make amends
sitting here and dazing
of why things aren't amazing
the path I've chosen to go
became so lonely, so cold
all of the sacrifices that I have made
ill do anything just for you and me to stay
I'm just so sick of all of this
its pointless, ridiculous
I stand here and try to hold myself together when I cry
I hate this feeling, like I wanna crawl up in a shell wishin' to die
it feels like this is turning into a routine
saying things, doing things that we don't even mean
and I stand here to feel myself burn
freaking out cause I don't know which way my head should turn
this relationship we got isn't a game
so stop playing and causing each other pain
I wish I had a time machine and turn back time
when everything was still in shape, still in place, still in line.

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Tricky Love

Love can be tricky, you see
Never is the way, you wish it to be
That one person, you love with all your heart
Making plans, right from the start
Time passes, and things start to shift
Your chest now weighs, of a million and one bricks
You hold on, never wanting to let go
Now your heart fell down, falling so low
You pray, you wish, for things to come around
But as time passes, you fall closer to the ground
You try to forget, all the wasted shed tears
Never thought losing them, could be your biggest fear
The pain is unbearable, as you hang on by a thread
Tears pool in your eyes, as you try not to let them shed
Take a deep breath, and exhale slowly
Wondering when in life, you became so lonely

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She's So Scared

I always feel as if I want to just disappear 
Maybe everything will be better if I wasn't here
I am always hiding behind smoking and getting high
Meanwhile deep down inside, i am just wishing to die

What's the purpose in living out this life?
I feel like my heart has been stabbed with a knife
Take a look down to see the scars upon my wrist
I am so ashamed, i squeeze my hands into fists

I have not been happy, not a smile to share
This wasn't suppose to happen and it just ain't fair
What would happen if they woke up and I just wasn't there
How would they react, would anyone even give a care?

And as I walk down this road, it is lonely and cold
But every step took, the story starts to unfold
I am scared to continue the journey up ahead
If only someone would listen to a word that I said

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The Story

In the first chapter, everything seemed so right
I wanted nothing more, than for you to hold me tight
We stood together so strong and so tall
Through the hardest, I'd never thought we would fall
But now things have changed, and nothing is the same
And I am always left here crying, going insane
My heart hurts, it aches, it's numb, i hate the pain
And i feel like our relationship is nothing but a game
I wanted nothing more, than to be happy with you forever
Just to smile on our memories, moments i would always treasure
But now that's gone, all that's left is un-shed tears
You told me i wouldn't, but now I live facing my fears
It hurts like hell, and i need you so bad
You don't even realize, but you were all i had
I sit and I think, how will this story end?
Was it all just a lie? Was it all just pretend?