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Despising this life, all I do is hide
It was only seconds ago of when i last cried
I wiped off my eyes and opened them wide
What would it be like if I just died?

This would all be better if i never lied
in which i ended up losing all of my pride
I was stupid, I thought I'd let it slide
And from here on, my soul has been fried

I told him I needed help, I needed a guide
If only he could just put this all aside
I hate how every remark is just another snide
In the end of this all, i hope i wont get denied.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 27, 2011 at 9:13 PM
hi brianna, it is a wonderful write, from a creative poet,,,,,best wishes and congrat's on the feature...
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May 24, 2011 at 4:23 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, briana
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May 23, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Congratulations Brianna on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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May 22, 2011 at 8:15 PM
Congrats Brianna on your featured poem this week on P.S... a great one to share with us all with luv..
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May 8, 2011 at 6:03 PM
nice poem, emotional to the end.
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May 8, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Meaningful and pleasant to read.
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