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Despising this life, all I do is hide It was only seconds ago of when i last cried I wiped off my eyes and opened them wide What would it be like if I just died? This would all be better if i never lied in which i ended up losing all of my pride I was stupid, I thought I'd let it slide And from here on, my soul has been fried I told him I needed help, I needed a guide If only he could just put this all aside I hate how every remark is just another snide In the end of this all, i hope i wont get denied.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/27/2011 9:13:00 PM
hi brianna, it is a wonderful write, from a creative poet,,,,,best wishes and congrat's on the feature...
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, briana
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations Brianna on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:15:00 PM
Congrats Brianna on your featured poem this week on P.S... a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:03:00 PM
nice poem, emotional to the end.
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Date: 5/8/2011 9:09:00 AM
Meaningful and pleasant to read.
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