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I Remember

I remember what you wore on our first day you knew just exactly the right things to say I remember all the looks that showed up on your face everywhere we went, even the exact place there was absolutely nothing that you could do that would of prevented me from falling for you I remember the way the butterflies made my stomach felt when you looked me in the eyes, my heart started to instantly melt if I could literally hand you and give you my heart that deed would have been done from the beginning, right from the start I promise you baby, that I have nothing to hide I just want you to know what I feel deep down inside I remember that spark from when we first met introducing me to a feeling that I'll never regret every night I lay in my bed cant get you out of my mind, not out of my head everything that I feel, feels like I'm in paradise as I sit here and I always start to fantasize when I'm with you,you shine as bright as a star I love everything that you do, everything that you are I need you, you make me stand strong as you tell me to learn from what is right and what is wrong and in the end of all this, I know that we truly do belong.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 11:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing..check out paper facade I think youll like it thank you for comment
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Date: 4/25/2011 6:38:00 PM
Thank you John and Thank you Carol. It means a lot
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Date: 4/25/2011 6:12:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brianna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/24/2011 8:24:00 PM
wonderful poem and words of love, thank you for the very kind words about my poetry it made my day...
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Catie and Thank you Jack! My fiancee now inspired me with this one so i shouldn't get all the credit but thanks a lot !!! :)
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:33:00 PM
Very sweet words, Brianna : )
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