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Premium Member waiting in a hotel lobby

I am sitting in a hotel lobby in a small town south of Des Moines
That means Iowa for those of you who did not know
I am drinking coffee with French Vanilla flavoring and sweetener
Waiting for my twin sister, listening to loud country western music
I would not mind the music if it was on a proper volume
It is weirdly loud and proud for six a.m.
as if it thinks it is better than rock and roll or bluegrass
my nerves are screaming

Premium Member soda coffee

blend warm coffee
with pepsi cola
and sweetener
to fizz the day

len

EXPATIATE

You can't make a living 
If you're not giving 
The services you render 
Tenders you money 
You won't make a dime
If you're idle all the time.

To be somebody 
You must do something 
To be nobody 
Just do nothing 
You can't make sweetener 
With lime or bitter leaf.

Knowledge is infinite 
But limited to those 
That does not seek it
You can't picture 
What you don't face
You can't be a public figure 
Without impact.

I endow book smart 
And street wise
For life is two sides 
Up and down, good and bad
Day and night, sun and Moon 
Mother and father, son and daughter 
Life can give you anything, when it's it time.


Premium Member Bye-Bye Moon

What Would Another
Moon Be Like?

In Ornate Marble
Dressed In Neon Gold;
Pouring It's Ever-Loving
Wealth Into The 
QUALIFIED Owner
Such A Brilliant Idea!

***

Putting All That Dusty
Dappled Gray
Faded Welcome
Over-Whelming
Lunacy To Shame.

LO! 

Bitter Drifter In Bitter Butter,
  Artificial Sweetener For
   BitterSweet Love.

-Gray Squirrel

10-22-2025

Premium Member whipped cream

puddings jello and fruit pies
great on a dessert
whipped into a frothy cream
full of sweet sugar
puffy and frothy
with sweetener
milk

Premium Member my three baskets

she was created by my sister
made of bunny material
for Easter
a cloth basket where I put my sweetener

a store bought basket made of plastic
sits on another counter, holding bread and buns

a tiny crystal basket holds nothing,
simply adorns the place.


WHAT NO SUGAR MEANS

What no sugar means
Is that it’s sugar free
For a diabetic
It’s very important
But when something
That’s supposed to be
Sugar free has sweetener
Inside, like fructose or
Sweet and low, it’s 
A misrepresentation of
A sugar free product, plus
It’s bad for diabetics

Premium Member The Flavor of Kool-Aid

("In Memory of Gary Vaughn", 2018, original encaustic)

The Flavor of Kool-Aid

We all get to choose the flavor of Kool-Aid we drink.
And maybe that’s the extent of free will.
We each have our world views formed and cemented
By these biases, personal and cultural, 
But even people as close as siblings 
Who share the same DNA and conditioning
Can end up as different as oil and vinegar

But I’ve had my share of Kool-Aid,
And I don’t remember it having any flavor
Other than sweet.
What it offers as a way to entice
Is a difference in color, 
Or put another way
A difference in appearance

And so it is with beliefs and biases.
It’s mostly a difference of surface over substance.

What is the substance of Kool-Aid?
A little dye, some sweetener,
And a whole lot of the universal solvent.
And what is the effect of our preferred Kool-Aid?
Reassurance that we have chosen
The best world view
To match our tastes.

Which are in fact chosen 
On the basis of 
What we want to see,
And the promise of something sweet.

(9/23/23)

This Chapter Is Called Happiness- a Guile

Poet: Em Em Mubarak Lawal
Sequel: after Paciolo pen saint

I rather call a spade a sword
why does the finesse of a wine
not linger on the tongue for long?
why does tears have to flow
when butterflies fill one’s belly,
and also when one could not curb
cobwebs of life from overcoming 
one’s happiest moments?

Life I thought was meant to be fair
one apple broke the camel’s back 
when man sold his eternal happiness 
for the sweetener enshrined inside the apple 
it is the puzzle of ages
as I also rest on the shore of sigh 
at the top crest of Mountain Sinai 
just as Moses received the ten decrees 
maybe this puzzle will be solved 
now that all of these rests on the rock of faith.

Premium Member Sugar, You Temptress

Sugar, you temptress, you hide everywhere 
In many a form you never play fair 
You sneak in my life like a thief in the night
Stealing my breath with every sweet bite 
Making me long for your taste everyday 
From the moment I wake, I’m your gullible prey 
A ‘dangerous substance’ is what you should be
With red and bold letters, for innocents to see 

There is not a food where your charms are not found
Queen of addictions, you should have been crowned 
More forms than a demon, you use to deceive 
You change your appearance, to make me believe 
Liquids and solids, and all in between 
Your arrogant invasion, at the least, very keen 
In every known texture, you’ve come to exist 
Creamy or hard, too many to list 

At breakfast, lunch, dinner, you always control 
Little by little, you’re taking a toll 
No matter the food, you always are there
You’ve caught me at times in your devilish snare 
I’ve seen you appear on some labels, three times
In a court you’d be guilty of three separate crimes 
Sugar, you temptress, I’m watching for you
And the very next time when you make your debut

Premium Member My Haven My Nirvana

sun shadow finger marks streak down my kitchen
they appear in even strokes, reminding me of piano keys
excited sun-thriving plants lean toward my blinds
hoping to soak in as much Vitamin D as they ever could

I leave the lights off, they are invasive before nine o’clock
no one else is up, the perfect time to prepare my wake up brew
humming comes out of me as I begin to smell my favorite blend
I add cocoa mix and sweetener to my oversized cup of joe

the first car of the day starts up next door. Mr. McClinty.
He arrives at work a couple of hours early, afraid to be late.
At seventy-six, he probably fears he will be replaced.
I sit down at the table and work the crossword as I sip my coffee.

Untitled

Sweetener of my tea
Listener to my plea
Keeper of my heart
Saver of my soul
I trust that you will lead me home


Potter of my flesh
Sustainer of this life
Giver of love
Healer of wounds
In you,I put all my hope.

Each time I roll the dice,
May your name ever appear.
Whenever I toss the coin,
May your name ever appear,
For without you,
Life is but an empty shell.

Premium Member K99

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canine tea...?
nine...!

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nine...canine tea...!

nine...cay'enne tea...?
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stan'sand
(p'nnnn all day

Premium Member The Sweetener

As sweet as the coffee with sugar, creamer and milk
Words from the mouth are said
As the well-sweetened coffee is soothing to the taste buds
Words are nice to the ears
And heartwarming to the heart
But too much sweetener will cause toothache
And too much praises may block the melodies of life from the nature
Too much complement may make one proud and lazy

Staring Death In His Corner

STARING DEATH IN HIS CORNER

I'm not the best pound for pound
boxer trading blow for blow
This bout won't end in this 36th round,
battling from the cradle from the set go

when my eyes refuses to behold life's wound,
uninterested in deciphering life's code show,
from when my wailing became a sound,
this boy baby became life's Eskimo

And you death, stare a brother in the face.
Despite the scar from the Diviner's torment,
He who bare in hand the enamor of grace,
The Father of all and the master of your fate,

you came for The son all to number his days.
But this in-ring soldier is born to fight & be great.
Pain you bring is sweetener enroute my eternal place.
IF I FEEL PAIN, I AM ALIVE
surviving like the edge of a knife.
IF I AM ALIVE, I CAN FIGHT,
triumphing over thee day & night.
IF I CAN FIGHT, I CAN WIN

(while trumpet of my victory keeps blowin')
because that's what Victor's do.

Vick Manuel Poetry {VMP}
Form: Chandler Sonnet
Copyright© April, 2021.

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