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Sugar, You Temptress

Sugar, you temptress, you hide everywhere In many a form you never play fair. You sneak in my life like a thief in the night Stealing my breath, with every sweet bite. Making me long for your taste, everyday From the moment I wake, I’m your gullible prey. A ‘dangerous substance’ is what you should be With red and bold letters, for innocents to see. There is not a food where your charms are not found Queen of addictions, you should have been crowned. More forms than a demon, you use to deceive You change your appearance, to make me believe. A cunning red fix, you have grown ever sly No longer detected by plain, human eyes. Names, you have many, they’re part if your guise And after so long, you still can surprise. Liquids and solids, and all in between Your arrogant invasion, at the least, very keen. In every known texture, you’ve come to exist Creamy or hard, too many to list. At breakfast, lunch, dinner, you always control Little by little, you’re taking a toll. No matter the food, you always are there You’ve caught me at times in your devilish snare. I’ve seen you appear, on some labels, three times In a court you’d be guilty of three separate crimes. And so I’ve decided that I’m waging war Against your addiction, you always want more In all of my foods you want to belong If I can avoid you, my life I’ll prolong. Sugar, you temptress, I’m watching for you And the very next time that you make your debut.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/5/2023 11:15:00 PM
ah the diabetic war echoes throughout the lines...have not had sugar in the house in years tho as you aptly draw attention to...it hides everywhere....great poem
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 10/6/2023 11:17:00 AM
Hi Timothy, It’s great that you have given it up, and yes, it hides everywhere! Thank you ??
Date: 10/2/2023 5:30:00 AM
I’m at war with it too. But I have admitted defeat and bought Monk Fruit sugar, it taste like sugar but none of the badness.. Sugar gives me horrible migraines and pre-diabetes. But Monk fruit has been the cure and now just watch everything else I eat. ?? fantastic poem! Patrick
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 10/2/2023 12:19:00 PM
Hi Patrick, You picked the perfect alternative to sugar. There are only 2 natural alternatives, Stevia and Monk fruit. I don’t like the taste of Stevia. Monk fruit is definitely the winner. Thank you very much!
Date: 9/29/2023 12:13:00 PM
Such a cute poem Samia with a big message! We all need to watch out for that nasty sugar!
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 9/30/2023 3:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Smita!
Date: 9/28/2023 1:55:00 AM
I'm tasting this sugar as I read this! And I'm already overweight! Tanks for the poem, Samia.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 9/28/2023 11:43:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrew!
Date: 9/27/2023 12:22:00 PM
Hi Samia, I couldn't agree more! Sugar truly is a temptress. Thank you for sharing this message in your wonderful poem of rhyme. I enjoyed reading this today. :-)
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 9/28/2023 11:42:00 AM
Hi Ann, Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked it!
Date: 8/5/2023 3:51:00 PM
Hi Samia, I always appreciate a well written poem and this is no exception. Great rhythm and rhyme and such sweet story:) wish I could avoid the temptation but ....... Take care Richard
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 8/5/2023 3:55:00 PM
Hi Richard, Thank you so much, I am glad that you liked it! I am in a war with sugar. Wish me luck!

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