Sugar, You Temptress

Sugar, you temptress, you hide everywhere 
In many a form you never play fair 
You sneak in my life like a thief in the night
Stealing my breath with every sweet bite 
Making me long for your taste everyday 
From the moment I wake, I’m your gullible prey 
A ‘dangerous substance’ is what you should be
With red and bold letters, for innocents to see 

There is not a food where your charms are not found
Queen of addictions, you should have been crowned 
More forms than a demon, you use to deceive 
You change your appearance, to make me believe 
Liquids and solids, and all in between 
Your arrogant invasion, at the least, very keen 
In every known texture, you’ve come to exist 
Creamy or hard, too many to list 

At breakfast, lunch, dinner, you always control 
Little by little, you’re taking a toll 
No matter the food, you always are there
You’ve caught me at times in your devilish snare 
I’ve seen you appear on some labels, three times
In a court you’d be guilty of three separate crimes 
Sugar, you temptress, I’m watching for you
And the very next time when you make your debut
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ray Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 11:15 PM
ah the diabetic war echoes throughout the lines...have not had sugar in the house in years tho as you aptly draw attention to...it hides everywhere....great poem
Salama  Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Hi Timothy, It’s great that you have given it up, and yes, it hides everywhere! Thank you ??
Cornwall Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 5:30 AM
I’m at war with it too. But I have admitted defeat and bought Monk Fruit sugar, it taste like sugar but none of the badness.. Sugar gives me horrible migraines and pre-diabetes. But Monk fruit has been the cure and now just watch everything else I eat. ?? fantastic poem! Patrick
Salama  Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Hi Patrick, You picked the perfect alternative to sugar. There are only 2 natural alternatives, Stevia and Monk fruit. I don’t like the taste of Stevia. Monk fruit is definitely the winner. Thank you very much!
Kulkarni Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Such a cute poem Samia with a big message! We all need to watch out for that nasty sugar!
Salama  Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 3:50 AM
Thank you very much Smita!
John Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 1:55 AM
I'm tasting this sugar as I read this! And I'm already overweight! Tanks for the poem, Samia.
Salama  Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Thank you very much Andrew!
Sangster - K Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Hi Samia, I couldn't agree more! Sugar truly is a temptress. Thank you for sharing this message in your wonderful poem of rhyme. I enjoyed reading this today. :-)
Salama  Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Hi Ann, Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked it!
Seal Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Hi Samia, I always appreciate a well written poem and this is no exception. Great rhythm and rhyme and such sweet story:) wish I could avoid the temptation but ....... Take care Richard
Salama  Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 3:55 PM
Hi Richard, Thank you so much, I am glad that you liked it! I am in a war with sugar. Wish me luck!
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