Surrenders Poems


Premium MemberPeaceful Surrenders


Glide into me Lord 
              and let me feel your loving hands 
                             resting on my head 
Like a wave on the ocean
               move through my soul 
                             and bless it 
Be the sunlight of my 
                     days 
                  and the moonshine 
                   of my lonely nights 
While I peacefully surrender 
                   to you 
            allow me to rest in 
                   your sweet embrace 
Let me soar like a bird  
                  towards your heavenly 
              grace....

                         Amen !
Categories: surrenders, appreciation, god,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberWeary Day Surrenders To Night;

Weary day surrenders to night;
   She wears a pleasant countenance.
Echoes of traffic hush the strife
   Of a long day; a moment of silence

Makes still even the Holy Ghost
   As the cobalt of the sky fades.
A moth makes love to the lamppost
   Knowing the warmth of its rays.

Come darkness, come tomorrow.
   Will they bring the nice thoughts I’ve thought?
Yea, my heart is not shallow
   But guides in a way my eyes cannot.
Categories: surrenders, dark, silence, sky, sunset,
Form: Rhyme


A Woman Surrenders a Man With a Purse

Shouldn’t  I assert A Maverick of a Woman?
 From behind surrendering a man, 
With a pistol purse prodding his back
 And a warning not to look back. 
Soon her determined fingers in his right pocket
 From same fishing out a locket…
 Jeez! The Guy is in dreamy love 
And she about to tamper with A Dove!
 “No, it has to be his trousers left pocket”.
 But from ransacked same extracts a socket
 “God! The Guy is an electrician
 And I this couldn’t discern; A Non Magician…
 
Alright vamoose, looking not back
 Unless you safe wisdom lack!”
Categories: surrenders, adventure, evil, men, money,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberJapan Surrenders

*Image of Japanese Elm Tree by CBC.

Japan Surrenders

Japan's crimson sun disrobes a dawning night rise sky,
An elm tree parasol's her coral samurais while they lie.

2022 February 22
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND SHORTIE
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 February 23
*2nd Place*
Bite Size Poem No.37
~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2022 March 01
Categories: surrenders, color, extended metaphor, sunset,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberSilent Spirit Soul Surrenders Soars To Heaven-

Discerning knowing 
ongoing boring
 destitute
 high-minded absolute
 confined it in resolve 
End bizarre I close my open eyes
 to see the inside
 of me as I am relieved 
of my spirit my soul surrenders and I fly like a dove
 toward the skies
 I'm enhanced
 I am no longer in a trance
 not Beyond belonging to myself 
I take on a second breath
 not I relinquish I passed the test
 I 
am
 solemn

3/14/20
written words by James Edward Lee Sr
Categories: surrenders, analogy, beautiful, bereavement, birth,
Form: Light Verse


Premium Member- the Heart Surrenders To the Truth -

A dream 
caught up in the night's 
magic and splendor
sitting at the driving seat 
turning feelings 

I realize every moment 
must be achieved
emotions labors 
in the heart's toil 

So many truths 
dreams and desire envelopes
standing in front of these eyes 
lids open wide 
Remember the words we said 
swore to protect and honor the joy
in all we experienced together

Drumming beats echo warm softly
Love found our soul naked and clean
purified soft snow melting desire queen 
The red rose whispers 
of passion and amor
petals tremble upon a breathless air 

With fragrant meanings tides turn
where the sweetest perfume blows divine 
flashing one spirit sparkling dewdrops horizon 
What can be as bright as the sun

Colors a bridge to only god knows 
The dream of a life beyond all none can compare 
were we could fly everywhere with angel wings
inside each others heartbeat complete 





Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
A Collaborated Poem 21.10.2015
Categories: surrenders, angel, beautiful, beauty, dream,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member- The Heart Surrenders To the Truth -


A dream 
caught up in the night's 
magic and splendor
sitting at the driving seat 
turning feelings 

I realize every moment 
must be achieved
emotions labors 
in the heart's toil 

So many truths dreams and desire envelopes
standing in front of these eyes lids open wide 
Remember the words we said 
swore to protect and honor the joy
in all we experienced together

Drumming beats echo warm softly
Love found our soul naked and clean
purified soft snow melting desire queen 
The red rose whispers 
of passion and amor
petals tremble upon a breathless air 

With fragrant meanings tides turn
where the sweetest perfume blows divine 
flashing one spirit sparkling dewdrops horizon 
What can be as bright as the sun

Colors a bridge to only god knows 
The dream of a life beyond all none can compare 
were we could fly everywhere with angel wings
inside each others heartbeat complete 





Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
A Collaborated Poem 21.10.2015
Categories: surrenders, beauty, blessing, dream, heart,
Form: Free verse

Heartache Surrenders

arms circle shoulders
pulling pieces together
heartache surrenders
Categories: surrenders, heart, love,
Form: Haiku
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