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- the Heart Surrenders To the Truth -

A dream 
caught up in the night's 
magic and splendor
sitting at the driving seat 
turning feelings 

I realize every moment 
must be achieved
emotions labors 
in the heart's toil 

So many truths 
dreams and desire envelopes
standing in front of these eyes 
lids open wide 
Remember the words we said 
swore to protect and honor the joy
in all we experienced together

Drumming beats echo warm softly
Love found our soul naked and clean
purified soft snow melting desire queen 
The red rose whispers 
of passion and amor
petals tremble upon a breathless air 

With fragrant meanings tides turn
where the sweetest perfume blows divine 
flashing one spirit sparkling dewdrops horizon 
What can be as bright as the sun

Colors a bridge to only god knows 
The dream of a life beyond all none can compare 
were we could fly everywhere with angel wings
inside each others heartbeat complete 





Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
A Collaborated Poem 21.10.2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/2/2015 1:34:00 PM
Excellent beauty is dazzling in this romantic poem. Loved much and much. Excellent 7 too. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 11/20/2015 5:52:00 AM
- Thank you for this beautiful poem, Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2015 6:48:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise! Another very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful!This is so very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!I just love it!Superb imagery!Just excellent.Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A fav!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 11/19/2015 6:00:00 PM
Another fabulous romantic poem Liam and Anne Lise your pens flow so beautifully together :-) hugs Jan xx
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