Japan Surrenders

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Zelkova serrata | Landscape Plants | Oregon State University

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*Image of Japanese Elm Tree by CBC.

Japan Surrenders

Japan's crimson sun disrobes a dawning night rise sky,
An elm tree parasol's her coral samurais while they lie.

2022 February 22
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND SHORTIE
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 February 23
*2nd Place*
Bite Size Poem No.37
~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2022 March 01

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 12:42:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Hilo ~

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/12/2022 4:52:00 PM

Thank you, Line, for your placed value of the words my friend, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2022 12:27:00 PM

Cool little poem. Big congrats on your win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/3/2022 12:43:00 PM

Granted, a broad paintbrush was used, and pleased was I of its splash, my extended courtesies, Andrea, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2022 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and tree picture. Few words with so much said. Both so colorful. Have a blessed day..............

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/1/2022 12:33:00 PM

Thanks, again, Paula, for your welcoming visits and sharing my friend, and blessings be yours truly, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/23/2022 4:08:00 PM

Absolutely stunning! Into my faves. Congratulations on your deserving win in Brian’s contest. I think it will be a top winner and bite-size contest too. I love it! Blessings and Aloha William. xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/23/2022 4:54:00 PM

Truly, Connie, you are a rare angelic soul that graces us always! Thanks for the uplift ahead, and may your eternal light shine on my friend, Aloha~William!