William Kelii Kekaula Poet Couplet

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Japan Surrenders

*Image of Japanese Elm Tree by CBC.

Japan Surrenders

Japan's crimson sun disrobes a dawning night rise sky,
An elm tree parasol's her coral samurais while they lie.

2022 February 22
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND SHORTIE
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 February 23
*2nd Place*
Bite Size Poem No.37
~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2022 March 01

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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 12:42 PM Beautiful poem, Hilo ~ William Kelii Kekaula November 12, 2022 at 4:52 PM Thank you, Line, for your placed value of the words my friend, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2022 at 12:27 PM Cool little poem. Big congrats on your win. William Kelii Kekaula March 3, 2022 at 12:43 PM Granted, a broad paintbrush was used, and pleased was I of its splash, my extended courtesies, Andrea, Aloha~William

Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2022 at 12:29 PM Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and tree picture. Few words with so much said. Both so colorful. Have a blessed day.............. William Kelii Kekaula March 1, 2022 at 12:33 PM Thanks, again, Paula, for your welcoming visits and sharing my friend, and blessings be yours truly, Aloha~William

Connie Marcum Wong February 23, 2022 at 4:08 PM Absolutely stunning! Into my faves. Congratulations on your deserving win in Brian’s contest. I think it will be a top winner and bite-size contest too. I love it! Blessings and Aloha William. xxoo William Kelii Kekaula February 23, 2022 at 4:54 PM Truly, Connie, you are a rare angelic soul that graces us always! Thanks for the uplift ahead, and may your eternal light shine on my friend, Aloha~William!

L Milton Hankins February 22, 2022 at 7:17 PM So lovely, William. I read it several times just to savor the way the words flowed. Nice writing! William Kelii Kekaula February 22, 2022 at 7:34 PM As couplets are a forte, Milt, your steep venture pleases me, thank you, Aloha~William!

Eve Roper February 22, 2022 at 3:38 PM beautiful imagery , William. Blessings my friend William Kelii Kekaula February 22, 2022 at 3:44 PM Thanks, Eve, as hints ease my friend, Aloha~William!