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- The Heart Surrenders To the Truth -

A dream 
caught up in the night's 
magic and splendor
sitting at the driving seat 
turning feelings 

I realize every moment 
must be achieved
emotions labors 
in the heart's toil 

So many truths dreams and desire envelopes
standing in front of these eyes lids open wide 
Remember the words we said 
swore to protect and honor the joy
in all we experienced together

Drumming beats echo warm softly
Love found our soul naked and clean
purified soft snow melting desire queen 
The red rose whispers 
of passion and amor
petals tremble upon a breathless air 

With fragrant meanings tides turn
where the sweetest perfume blows divine 
flashing one spirit sparkling dewdrops horizon 
What can be as bright as the sun

Colors a bridge to only god knows 
The dream of a life beyond all none can compare 
were we could fly everywhere with angel wings
inside each others heartbeat complete 





Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid
A Collaborated Poem 21.10.2015

Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2015

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Lystra Siew Date: 11/12/2015 11:46:00 AM Firstly thank you Anne for the kind words. I love the way your words dances with emotions. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2015 12:20:00 PM - Lystra, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein Date: 10/26/2015 5:36:00 PM Wow! This is a very beautiful poem.....great collaboration Anne and Liam u both nailed it.... I really enjoyed reading it.... :) Login to Reply

Thomas Martin Date: 10/26/2015 12:54:00 PM Great write!! Last stanza so memorable: Love the last two lines particularly about angels flying in heartbeats. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:22:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elis Artis Date: 10/25/2015 10:02:00 AM Another productive collab! This is a masterpiece Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:21:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Elis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri Date: 10/24/2015 3:50:00 PM "Drumming beats echo warm softly Love found our soul naked and clean" wow. Your collabos always produces so much beauty. 7+ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:20:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Njeri :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez Date: 10/24/2015 1:42:00 AM Lovely poem...lovely thoughts. Anne and LIam, congrats on another successful collab! The last line is tops "inside each others heartbeat complete"! 7. hugs to both of you... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:20:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 10/23/2015 3:24:00 PM With words like these, how could a heart not surrender!! Another lovely collaboration. Full marks to both of you! ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:20:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 10/23/2015 2:23:00 PM Congrats to both of you Anne-Lise and Liam. Solid performance, the passions excels! A7 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:19:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Robert :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neva Romaine Date: 10/23/2015 12:53:00 PM Hey Anne Lise, stopped by for a visit. An absolutely beautiful poem collaboration from you and Liam. Filled with deep and passionate love and longing. Excellent writing and expression from you both! Be Blessed, Neva Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:19:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Neva :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/22/2015 3:21:00 PM You guys make a magical duo!! Beautiful sentiments in this poem. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:18:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Patricia Opel Jaye Date: 10/22/2015 2:46:00 PM Anne beautiful I'm in awe of your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry I look forward to reading more of your work. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2015 1:18:00 PM - Thanks for the visit, while I was away for a while - Nice to see you, Patricia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/22/2015 5:16:00 AM Splendid collaboration Anne Lise and Liam.. =`) your brush match well... =`)~Olive Eloisa Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2015 6:42:00 AM - Olive, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/22/2015 2:33:00 AM Your verses will make, even the Muse herself, envious! Congratulations to both of you, Anne-Lise and Liam! This is beyond marvelous! A seven to each! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2015 2:48:00 AM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 10/21/2015 3:15:00 PM A wonderful collaboration A-L and Liam Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 11:34:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/21/2015 3:02:00 PM Hi Ann Lise n' Liam! Another very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Just wonderful!So very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!I just love it!Superb imagery!Just excellent.Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 11:33:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/21/2015 2:08:00 PM Some very good metaphorical language..I enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 11:32:00 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/21/2015 2:00:00 PM your pen anne lise sparkled beautiful in this thank you deeply for the pleasure as always it shines wishing you a blessed evening pal Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2015 2:06:00 PM - Same words goes to you, Liam - I wish you a lovely evening and a great day tomorrow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)