Soured Poems | Examples


Premium MemberHow cottage cheese was created

The cow took a chance, pirouetted and pranced
to the ancient tune..
Her body sagged and one foot snagged and she
tripped on the tip of the moon..
Farmers found her at the trough.
Dogs danced in circles,
Roosters meowed.
Crows began cawing at quarter to five.
The locals were astounded the  cow had survived..
The people now swear she has special powers.
A farmer sells her cottage cheese as most 
her milk has soured.
Categories: soured, age, animal, food,
Form: Light Verse

Premium MemberShe Soured Him On Marriage

Mockery and ridicule shut him down completely.
Vowed to never marry again; did this most discreetly
Dated a lovely widow named Mama T. McMeetly.
Who married someone else, but thought of him quite sweetly.
Categories: soured, marriage,
Form: Rhyme


Soured and Faded

and now, colour blots whitewash on blanched wall; yesterday distanced from today’s gale—on the facade, from where, towards the end, faced face down time’s row in anticlockwise retrogression; the beginning from the end ends in the beginning, with each footprint laced—crowned in blue daisies, we giggled out “Oh! My God” as fleets of golden butterflies twinkled in broad daylight... I recall—a cyclone had begun, wafted us aloof

one deadwood
makes no woodland
terracotta shrub

and the struggle continues—like shadows in blank places and distant church bell gongs in the eclipse of our eyes like the moon and sun in a miniature wedding day—an endless abyss submerges the hollow of a burning ring with a gully wind rush through the needle’s eye as we dig deeper into dark secrets of our cardinal sins; apple's taste becomes acrid, putrid strawberry on coiled lips, whiffs of death scented coarse roses, stowed underneath sloshes of salt-waterfalls

wooden chest
bullets from her razor lips
words bank
Categories: soured, black love, break up,
Form: Haibun

Soured Memories

"Oh/ What Sad/ The Nile Brings!"+++"A Lonesome 
Past/ The Tree Loving Birds/ In Their Feathers 
Were Clung'd!"+++"Not A Day Would Sorrow 
Cease/ Not A Joy Would My Respite 
Know!"+++"Drowning In This Heathen Of Despair/ 
Battered Still' But I Long To Someday Rise!"
Categories: soured, sorrow
Form: Etheree
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