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Jerusalem 1969

Resting on a bench
outside the old city wall
I heard a tapping.
A blind man was approaching.
As he felt his way
he would tap my legs,
so I said hello. 
He sat beside me
and asked who I was.
I spoke no Hebrew,
Shlomo hardly any English.
He tried German and Spanish.
A little French we had in common.
Lonely I guess,
he asked me 
back to his place,
a short walk 
and down to a basement,
bare essentials
spotless.
He brewed coffee,
cautioned me
not to move anything
lest he could not find it.
He had lost his sight
in the Arab Israeli war of 1948.
There was much else 
he tried to share.
I listened 
but could not comprehend.
I felt humbled.
When I left
he was so grateful,
gave me his address.
I wrote
but did not hear back.
Who would read it for him?

Premium Member Ode To the Greatest Two I Ever Knew

The two greatest Jews I ever knew
       Rabbi Shlomo Carlebach, a singing troubador
     reaching lost souls through his joyous music
       Taken from us too soon, too soon, 1994

      The Lubavitcher Rebbe, who saw a smile on every Jew
        Made you proud to say, 'The Rebbe I knew'
      Never found a Jew so jaded, so touch
        that he couldn't find his sunshine, sure enough




       ___________________________________________
       Both of these great men were taken from us in 1994.

Premium Member Something's Lost In Translation

Yaakov is Jacob
       Yosef now Joseph
     Shlomo now Solomon
       Jonathan - Yonatan

     Is it the Anglicization
       or the Hebraization 
     underpins the garblization
       of this transliteration


Premium Member 699 Wives Too Many

King Shlomo was a real smart man
He built the Temple per God's plan
They say he penned "The Song of Songs"
Such brilliance should have lasted long
But was he really truly wise
What need had he for all those wives


       

      Iambic Tetrameter

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