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Premium Memberblind date is second rate

in my current manic state
I do not hesitate
to throw away my fate
walking off is my date

not a potential mate
identify source of hate
to silliness I equate
that guy was second rate

pretty sure you can commiserate
for your last blind date
was not totally great
book writers collaborate

publisher may have to wait
send a teaser as bait
this guy was named Nate
Not my ideal blind date
Categories: second rate, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Monorhyme

Premium MemberSecond Rate

It's what they always do
It's what they've always done
It's what they always say
It's what they've always said

No matter what I do
No matter what I say
No matter what I've done 
No matter what I've said

They judge me by themselves, they judge themselves by me

Whatever words I say, whatever acts I do, it will always be second rate

Because for me she got pregnant with you.
Categories: second rate, betrayal, boy, bullying, childhood,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberSecond Rate Valentine

I thought we had a love that was great.
Valentine, we broke up as of late.
I did realize
you are not a prize.
In reality, you’re second rate.
Categories: second rate, holiday, lost love,
Form: Limerick

I Only Speak Second Rate Spanish

I    ONLY    SPEAK   SECOND-RATE   SPANISH





I didn’t say it then, but I can say it now -
I can say many things in many languages, and how!
English, Russian, French and the lovely Spanish tongue.
First one  I started with, when I was young, 
Was Spanish  - learned in The States  and 
Obviously Mexican Spanish, perfectly  at  hand  
For communicating with half a billion who likewise speak, 
If  in Latin America and over  world you seek.

I  chanced  to meet   a long-lost acquaintance,
A snobbish woman of little real substance,
Who spoke  Spanish and we  practised our learned word.
Oh, she says, you speak only Mexican Spanish.  She demurred
     -	 Not real Spanish………
Actually what she thaid wath, “You thpeak Mekthican Thpanish”
Real  Thpanish  ith  called   Cathtellano……
You would not be underthtood in Thpain, oh no!”

I obviously  disappointed her with my inferior ability
She certainly disappointed me with her snobbery.
Now I can say that speaking Spanish is a pleasure
But  thpeaking Thpanish is a torture.
The people of  Thpain will have to be denied my voice
But the billion others may  hear its song and joys.
Categories: second rate, funny
Form: Couplet

Second Rate Beauty Queen

When you look at her you wonder,
How can she think like that?
But when she looks at herself in the mirror,
All she sees is the fat.

She claims that she's too busy,
With friends, work, and school.
To sit down for a family meal,
But in reality she simply longs to be cool.

As days go by her body begins to wear and thin,
Her parents begin to wonder if it's too late.
To save their only daughter,
Who's still obsessed with her weight.

Knowing it was time, she left a note that said:
"To all those who were so mean,
And pressured me to be thin. You'll be happy to know,
I died as I lived: A second rate beauty queen.
Categories: second rate, daughter, death, depression, life,
Form: Narrative


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