Second Rate Valentine

I thought we had a love that was great.
Valentine, we broke up as of late.
I did realize
you are not a prize.
In reality, you’re second rate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/18/2014 10:05:00 AM
Robert This is definitely not your regular Valentine poem. The love is hate and the fondness is goodbye. Someone took an anti holiday pill with this one. LOL Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my You Lying Dunce poem.
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:09:00 PM
Great comeback...congrats on your win..made me smile. BG
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:36:00 AM
You told her....congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/14/2012 6:47:00 AM
lol...Congratulations on your win Robert...first rate, btw ;) big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:31:00 PM
Robert~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:29:00 PM
congrats on an awesome win Robert ..luv..
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:34:00 AM
Very nice. You should do well in the contest.Good luck.
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Date: 1/21/2012 6:42:00 AM
I love this Robert! It's a sort of classy way of telling her she is not up to your standards!!! Much luck to you in the contest ;)
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:48:00 PM
GOOD one for her contest, Robert and with excellent rhyme and meter. A quick question, did you realize I was having a conversation with myself because I am not sure all are getting that.
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:28:00 PM
LOL, love it!
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:39:00 AM
Ouch... Great but bite-ing limerick.
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:39:00 AM
That's an interesting write! She's second rate! You must've been quite upset! I love it the Limerick Robert!! Great Work!!
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Date: 1/16/2012 4:30:00 AM
Oh wow,don't hold your punches Bob x
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:32:00 PM
wow... yes... Robert... give it to them... a great poem... no telling if that person, knows they are not the end... enjoyed your limerick... always,..p.d.
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