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Second Rate Valentine

I thought we had a love that was great. Valentine, we broke up as of late. I did realize you are not a prize. In reality, you’re second rate.

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/18/2014 10:05:00 AM

Robert This is definitely not your regular Valentine poem. The love is hate and the fondness is goodbye. Someone took an anti holiday pill with this one. LOL Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my You Lying Dunce poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/15/2012 7:09:00 PM

Great comeback...congrats on your win..made me smile. BG

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/14/2012 9:36:00 AM

You told her....congrats on your win!

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/14/2012 6:47:00 AM

lol...Congratulations on your win Robert...first rate, btw ;) big hugs,love deb

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2012 10:31:00 PM

Robert~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2012 10:29:00 PM

congrats on an awesome win Robert ..luv..

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 1/28/2012 9:34:00 AM

Very nice. You should do well in the contest.Good luck.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 1/21/2012 6:42:00 AM

I love this Robert! It's a sort of classy way of telling her she is not up to your standards!!! Much luck to you in the contest ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2012 5:48:00 PM

GOOD one for her contest, Robert and with excellent rhyme and meter. A quick question, did you realize I was having a conversation with myself because I am not sure all are getting that.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/16/2012 2:28:00 PM

LOL, love it!

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/16/2012 11:39:00 AM

Ouch... Great but bite-ing limerick.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/16/2012 9:39:00 AM

That's an interesting write! She's second rate! You must've been quite upset! I love it the Limerick Robert!! Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/16/2012 4:30:00 AM

Oh wow,don't hold your punches Bob x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2012 10:32:00 PM

wow... yes... Robert... give it to them... a great poem... no telling if that person, knows they are not the end... enjoyed your limerick... always,..p.d.