Second Rate Valentine

I thought we had a love that was great.
Valentine, we broke up as of late.
I did realize
you are not a prize.
In reality, you’re second rate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Davis Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Robert This is definitely not your regular Valentine poem. The love is hate and the fondness is goodbye. Someone took an anti holiday pill with this one. LOL Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my You Lying Dunce poem.
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Great comeback...congrats on your win..made me smile. BG
Macfarlane Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 9:36 AM
You told her....congrats on your win!
Burch Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 6:47 AM
lol...Congratulations on your win Robert...first rate, btw ;) big hugs,love deb
A   Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:31 PM
Robert~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD
Sweetheart Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:29 PM
congrats on an awesome win Robert ..luv..
Ronthorpe Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 9:34 AM
Very nice. You should do well in the contest.Good luck.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 6:42 AM
I love this Robert! It's a sort of classy way of telling her she is not up to your standards!!! Much luck to you in the contest ;)
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 5:48 PM
GOOD one for her contest, Robert and with excellent rhyme and meter. A quick question, did you realize I was having a conversation with myself because I am not sure all are getting that.
Horne Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:28 PM
LOL, love it!
Eastman Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Ouch... Great but bite-ing limerick.
Sivey Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 9:39 AM
That's an interesting write! She's second rate! You must've been quite upset! I love it the Limerick Robert!! Great Work!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 4:30 AM
Oh wow,don't hold your punches Bob x
A   Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 10:32 PM
wow... yes... Robert... give it to them... a great poem... no telling if that person, knows they are not the end... enjoyed your limerick... always,..p.d.
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