Revisiting Poems | Examples


Revisiting Slumber

Revisiting Slumber 
Not wanted 
Hinder from the sun 
Revisiting slumber 
Detached from everyone 
One of those doomy moods 
No spice toward encouragement 
Loneliness is friendly 
Rain is humming 
Just going through changes 
Into the unknown 
A drought from society 
Never show up when invited 
Mind falling into emptiness 
Covered up in cashmere 
Block out windows heavily 
One of those days 
Yesterday is delayed 
Another evening fades 
Amber drink to the grave
Categories: revisiting, dark,
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberMemory Revisiting

black cherry dusk skies
and moon rose, it was silver
butterfly quivers

the gemmed stars were out
and Mom tending blooms, singing
clematis clinging

jade dragonfly lake
comes again in memory
with anemones

Dad had just come home
one yesterday of my life
when roses were rife
Categories: revisiting, beauty, family, flower, memory,
Form: Haiku


Premium MemberRevisiting The Old pond

       W
         O
          R
          D
         S
       Basho
   Into the old pond
settling in. A cave
Categories: revisiting, tribute,
Form: Concrete

Premium MemberRevisiting the Same Ground

(John Day Fossil Beds, 2018)

Revisiting The Same Ground

Over and over again
I find myself returning 
to the same thoughts, ideas, histories
but now with years more experience between
and years more depth
behind what were once words
so glibly recited.

Is this how we all learn,
parrots one and all, reciting 
lessons, sounds, songs and jingles
until they somehow
take on meaning
filled with the substance of Life
which at every turn
fill again a little more?

Tide-like the mind moves
in cycles of night and day, wake and sleep
building layers which erode
but never really go away
layers which in time harden to stone
sedimentary then metamorphic 
each supplanted by the next
in endless waves across endless generations.

And so we go
treading the same old ground
‘round and ‘round
haunted by glimpses of déjà vu
humbled by realization
we have been here before
without a clue 
how blind we really are.

(10/19/23)
Categories: revisiting, growth, introspection, perspective, psychological,
Form: Narrative

Premium MemberRevisiting Chicken Or Egg

.
Saw.                              A 
   A clip.                 Little 
   I just can’t.     Girl is
  Get over it     Crying 
 The child has a plea
  “They give eggs;
     So that they can live;
        So that we do not kill them..”
           All the while the grown ups
              Have been arguing-
                 Chicken or 
                      Egg 
                         ?"
Categories: revisiting, allegory, angst, animal, bird,
Form: Concrete


Revisiting

Unearthing blind roots, cyclic thoughts
spin round again
as if they had just come to me,
and had not been arriving forever.

Abandoned living-spaces excavated
from under the forgotten foundations
of elsewhere.
Places we leave our sweat in,
litter that never goes away,

stuff in pockets that once belonged
to a best jacket.
A best life thus far – but when?
Categories: revisiting, poetry,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberRevisiting a Childhood Homeplace

Lovely sight I behold,
fall delight sheathed in gold.

Childhood swing, chosen tree.
Deep-wood path beckons me.

Rough wood fence . . . all of these,
stuff of sweet memories.

Picture 2


August 17, 2021
entered in the In Essence 2 Poetry Contest     Placed 1st
Sponsor: Joseph May

August 28, 2021
Contest Title: Bite Size Poem No. 19        Placed 2nd
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

August 30, 2021
entered in "Your Favorite August 2021 Poem" Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Categories: revisiting, memory, nostalgia,
Form: Verse

Revisiting Trauma

I’m glad to see you again. 

By my own terms of course. 

Don’t think that I’m allowing you to invade. 

But instead, I am simply inviting you to leave my subconscious. 

And be seen. 

I have accepted your presence. 

And I have accepted that what was done to me is not my own sin. 

Thank you for visiting. 

Now release!
Categories: revisiting, mental illness,
Form: Free verse

Revisiting My Mother Goddess

Revisiting My Mother Goddess

The lake
That looks like a piano
On it sat 
Thousand cranes and two
Seemed like a moonlight sonata by the moonlight.

But why is my mind yearning forever
For the  unmindful musings?
I had been there once, nearly
Forty years ago.

They send me return tickets from Jhargram,
For the festive October,
Celebrating the home coming of our mother goddess
But they never take me to that childhood playmates.
Categories: revisiting, cheer up,
Form: Verse

Premium MemberRevisiting the Buddha

We were visited by a baby
yesterday.

It felt good to bow
into her glittery brown eye level,

To speak of whatever came to mind
which was mostly about her truth
and blossoming beauty

Knowing she would not judge
and would listen
patiently
as long as I might care
to continue our song
of aging story.

Her response,
to continue sleeping
or to smile
while feeling
feeding eye to eye
mutual warmth

This is what I remember
wanting most
to speak about,

To re-membrane
on this Memorial Day

Visited not yet by a victim 
of war
but by a wise innocent
for peace.
Categories: revisiting, baby, health, innocence, memorial
Form: Political Verse

Premium MemberRevisiting My Park

Luneta, I used to almost venerate you once
but glassy skyscrapers have put you away…
still, I kept the fragrant lawns deep in my bones,
with Muppet tricks and hazy star-gazing.
Although recollections pump on my mind,
you’ve transformed, you’ve changed...
I buried you away till on mellow, rainy days
memories pass …just like kites in the evening
or those riotous, girlish escapades
igniting shadow-plays to all come out…
and everything is drowned in retrospection.
Tonight, I visit your new ponds and clinch my hand 
because for all my affinity to remembrances,
it's the shadow of childhood, of impish friends

that make the most languishing stories. 



2/20/2016
Contest of Craig Cornish: The Park 
*Luneta (Rizal)Park ~  one of the most historic
areas in our city
Categories: revisiting, nostalgia, places,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Revisiting

sanctuary of my young adulthood
I weep in front of my former home
a student cottage, a secret life
set in a steep hillside it is still beautiful but empty 
and neglected
shake shingles replaced by lincoln log siding
horrible
I walk around and peer into the room where I would study
wall of french doors out onto wooded acres
now a state park
I can hear ghost echos of the dog barking
far up in the woods
come back...
and my infant son warbling as I rocked him with my foot
studying late into the night
great love in that home, great long sleeps and lazy winter storms
as I discovered myself 
my sons father would join me at my pleasure
we were not ready yet
still a work in progress
and my son
a child of greatest love 
our beginning.
Categories: revisiting, happiness, love,
Form: Free verse
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