Notes About The Poem

Revisiting a Childhood Homeplace

Lovely sight I behold,
fall delight sheathed in gold.

Childhood swing, chosen tree.
Deep-wood path beckons me.

Rough wood fence . . . all of these,
stuff of sweet memories.

Picture 2


August 17, 2021
entered in the In Essence 2 Poetry Contest     Placed 1st
Sponsor: Joseph May

August 28, 2021
Contest Title: Bite Size Poem No. 19        Placed 2nd
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

August 30, 2021
entered in "Your Favorite August 2021 Poem" Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
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Agustin Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:46 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Callus Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Travelling back in time often tends to awaken our dormant muse, Janice. Both poem and illustration are delightful. Congratulations on a fine win. Regards // paul
Radice Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Back with congratulations Janice! Cheers - Gary
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:48 AM
I love a good nostalgic poem. Very well deserved win. Congrats.
La France Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 3:11 PM
Janice, congratulations on your win in my contest~ love and serenity _ Constance
Canerdy Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 12:33 PM
Constance, THANKS so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Great rhyme , Janice, congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
May Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 5:53 AM
Wonderful write Janice, Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:16 AM
Joseph, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win. I am thrilled. Janice
Radice Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:19 AM
Your words make for lovely reading Janice. They ooze warmth like the picture itself. I almost want to explore through another verse of your poem what lies around the corner in the picture. Cheers - Gary
Canerdy Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 8:16 PM
Gary, thanks a million! Janice
Bauer Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:12 PM
this is lovely, janice! good luck in the contest...
Canerdy Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 8:15 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Leffanta Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Perfect caption for the illustration!
Canerdy Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:35 AM
It takes you right back Janice and those happy childhood memories come flooding back. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
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